black in burst (with grats to redheart)

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Open Poetry #23

black in burst (with grats to redheart)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-12-14 08:00 AM

ain't they though?
are they less?
like chimes
to beg
only willing
whe n the win d blows...

so
and then
even
when
you wait
so
you go
craz y...enough...

i have missed your aching wise words

I raise my arms.
I pray for rain.

i have missed your breaking eye hurt

sometimes
I stomp
a period
and blind
myself
just for emphasis

Then I get
carried
away
and endings
become
ellipses...

i have missed your black in burst

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-14-2002 08:11 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-12-14 08:19 AM

serenity,

ya feel better now? Enjoyed

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-12-14 09:55 AM

serenity

I miss her too!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-14 10:04 AM

Hey Karen

I don't know who ya'll are speaking of, but you must really miss her........
Sorry, friend. Hope all's better soon.
BTW, I like the way you wrote this....

See ya later, alligator
After 'while crocidle....
(Now why did I write that????? )

I miss you, Ms. Serenity.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-12-14 01:02 PM

a burst of

Sereneheart Angryblaze

love the pauses, the stop
look
read
understand

beautiful

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-14 01:34 PM

yes, I agree

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

6 posted 2002-12-16 02:15 PM

I love this.

(I don't know what it is, but everything I read today can be related back to- ... anyway, its depressing.)

I really loved the poem.

hugs, you.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-12-16 04:19 PM

I've often thought that if I could understand you I would be able to understand all women but I'm not so sure I really want to......Wonderful images.

Sincerely

White in recluse...........

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-12-18 05:32 PM

Your poems are her workshop.

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