Open Poetry #20 |
when the music applies |
MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
this is about those times in your life, when you turn on the radio or fav CD and the song that comes out is just right... and for that 3 minutes (give or take) you reach a harmony with life... *when the music applies* Jewel "When you're standing in deep water and you're bailing yourself out with a straw. When you're drowning in deep water and you wake up making love to the wall..." -cold december nights that smell like pints of ice cream and empty pizza boxes. wet, pillowcases and monika's face behind my eyelids. Everclear "Father of mine Tell me how do you sleep? With the children you abandoned and the wife i saw you beat?" -frustrated knuckles bruising and cracking my ribs; foreheads roughly kissing the walls and bedposts; hollow voices and soggy apologies...when the morning reveals the damage already done. Beethoven "The Fur Elise" -i hear your fingers over the phone as they glide across the black and white. my vision starts to drown and we play in unison through the receiver. i adore you Somer. Less Than Jake "That same old crowd that drags me down; another day in a Boring Town. That same old crowd that brings me down; a boring life in a Boring Town." -taking in the skyline from my exciting backyard vantage, the sun smiles its burning smile; i sigh and turn away. the cars suddenly apper and move fast, things coming to life and dying in the blink of my eye. and i missed it.the ice in my cola melts, the world spins a little, and my death creeps slowly closer. The Eagles "How they dance in the courtyard sweet summer sweat. Some dance to remember... Some dance to forget. ...Ready a room at the Hotel California. Anytime of year. You can find it here." -the martinis are dry but never run dry; the palms are still, the pool is right. the sweat is beading, the smiles are soothing the band plays on in my private paradise. i'll get there one day... Sotly let your eyelids collapse And hear the beating of your heart; The pulse beneath your temples thrums. The melody of a paradise... The rhythm of your reality... the music of your life. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very unique intro! enjoyed the read! ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Warm welcome I too liked your intro ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, MidnightSun. It looks as if you put a lot of thought into your work, and that just shows us you will be a welcome addition to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will love it here... I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. You make quite an entrance Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, welcome and thanks for reading one of my poems earler. I like your idea here, music always has had the power to transform my mood. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This midnitesun welcomes you, MidnightSon. Music soothes the savage beasts, and also soothes poets. I often dream of Hotel California. Even though I grew up there and left many times for greener pastures, my dreams often take me back to Will Rogers State Beach (Santa Monica,CA) or somewhere else along the coast.Thanks for the memory refresh. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! This is such a melodious debut, sweet friend, I love all forms of music but Shakira is the artist that makes me most inspired, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Son of Midnight, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son of Midnight, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Ah, MidnightSon I find your passion ][of music][ circles my own! I found your imagination derived from music, & I loved it! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
I have a tendency to listen to the "oldies" and let myself get taken back--sometimes too far back! I just love this. |
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