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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 02:41 PM

When only dreams are all to see
in slumber hues of white and blue
from mountain high to raging sea
beneath the light of crimson true

A love of one felt strong by two
in bond of heart’s blood raging in
Whispers of the dawn awake anew
Soft echo of passion therein

Beyond the rocks of crashing wave
upon the hill of shortened green
where hearts are one in freedom gave
among the spray of watery sheen

Dance then to song ‘gainst softest light
before the glow of yon round moon
Lightly prancing a soulful sight
as one the kiss does bring to swoon

Till ‘gain the orb of nightly shine
does bring to hill the dance of two
one heart shalt be a gift to thine
whence love does fall at drip of dew

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-06-08 03:20 PM

In the motion of the rocking waves. Loved the final line. The ribbon 'round the gift.
ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-06-08 03:36 PM

Magnus,
A very nice write. Enjoyed the read.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-06-08 09:55 PM

Ah, another sigh filled poem.
Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-06-09 02:24 PM

Like this Magnus...James

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-06-09 07:40 PM

Magnus darling boy How do you do this? You keep writing such perfect poetic wonders that fill my soul with such sweetness? I feel your writing in the deepest part of my soul darling boy and it’s as always magical.

You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utter delight. I’m awed by you time after time

Darling heart your writing is always something incredibly special, this is stunning utterly utterly stunning.

I missed you yesterday, in my minds eye I knew there was beauty I was just didn’t have the time to reach out for it. So tonight I’ll have to sup at your mind of find and drink your think. You do know I utterly utterly love this don’t you? Mmmmmm you are as always splendiferous