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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Her beauty stunned me. She was someone I could fall for, Talking with her told me that. Smart, witty, flirty, and kind She had all that I found attractive Before I even laid eyes on her. Her beauty stunned me. As I looked at her photo, Ivory skin with full, darkly painted lips Flashing a coquettish smile, And mischievous lovely eyes Framed by that brilliantly red mane. Her beauty stunned me. Striking is the first thought I had Exciting and absolutely beautiful. My hands hovered over my keys, My mind not able to focus Forgetting what I was about to say. Her beauty stunned me. We chatted more, I relaxed some Then we said our 'so longs' And she signed off for the day As I sat there, staring at her picture Because her beauty stunned me. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Nicely written sir, and much enjoyed, thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow...enjoyed this...it happens so often I am told on the Internet. Well said JP! ~Smiles & hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes..she definitely is stunning (I've seen the photo too). A nice 'remembrance'.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I know this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, sadly though I was duped as I loved Joanna with all my heart but she never really loved me and now we are apart and she never talks to me again! (sad sigh) I hope this case is an exception and this is true joy, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet JP, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Nice catch PdV, memory lane did bring up some good things today... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sometimes its enough to know they really did care for us once..and those picture...will always be somewhere...Well, for me that is. I think you and I shared the same experience around the same time once. That certainly seems like a long time ago now doesn't it? Reading your work these days and loving it as always, JP. *Jenn* SARCASM BREEDS A BROKEN HEART, and I have enough cracks. Please stop breaking me! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh... How our memories intertwine... and intertwine... and intertwine... and inspire us to write as we do... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I guess it isn't me that you are referring to! LOL --my photo has never been posted! Have a great day! Logging off now... Earth Angel |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Post your pic for me EA, I could use some inspiration!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Amazing how we can be affected so strongly by people we've never come face to face with... wonderful write ;-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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