Open Poetry #25 |
You Lost Me There (23,000TH POST) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-03-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Intersting piece that held me to the end |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Congratulations sidekick!! And a wonderful post to mark this milestone! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow!! What a write! Congratulations on another milestone Noah!!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
congratulations - great piece, you have an incredible talent for writing. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!!!! This is a strong piece. I enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
23,000 posts! I cannot believe mine eyes! Every time I turn around you have added another thousand posts to your impressive tally! This particular poem was a very interesting journey! I think I'll go back and read it once more to gain an even greater appreciation of it! Warm congratulatory hugs, Linda |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Noah - congrats on the milestone post - a great poem with powerful images and wonderful sayings - you write so very well - thanks - Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Congrats on 23,000 posts. A substantial write. Did I detect a little bit of Eminem influence in this piece...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great job! Eric |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Incredible work, Noah. Did you do the art work too? Core |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Noah, very nice i really liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Scared me. I liked it but is scared me. the Wind is invisible. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
CONGRATULATIONS, NOAH ON 23,000 This is a very good post for your milestone. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Noah...we are tired just from watching you run thru the forums congrats on your milestone poet sir. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Brilliant! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
CONGRATS! We Love You! |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
great,fabulous, and enchanting >>phantom poet<< |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how do u do this? love the buddha stuff, life really is suffering, aint it, friend? so good; but leave the poor flakes of snow to be, they are fragile enuf |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Congratulations on 23,000 posts This is a wonderful poem you kept me reading all the way through, thanks for sharing |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A thoughtful, well written milestone, Noah. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Noah, er belated congrats? i confess i don't get all the references in your poem...i do feel your anguish and helplessness but can't exactly pinpoint the source since i'm distracted by the wonderful language and my ignorance.... a note to say i read? and shall keep this in my library to see if i can derive more when i get wiser... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
argh, didnt save it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - Congratulations! And this? My My - I think it is your best ( I always say that but this time I am serious) Here: Games over, time up, BOOM! Smacked me in the face you did - awesome writing - actually so many passages I wanted to quote but couldnt - they all hit me . . . xxoo |
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