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What's A Teardrop To Do?
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What's A Teardrop To Do? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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What’s A Teardrop To Do? ~*Marge Tindal*~  What’s a teardrop to do but .......f ............a ..................l ......................l overwhelmed by it all ? This saline notion, brimming with emotion of memories in recall~ On a lash it may linger sometimes caressed by a finger of regret that came to be~ Slips to a soft cheek, beyond words of speak then in a streak … it silently falls~ This tear of emote … spills a heart-in-break~ What’s a teardrop to do … but fall ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...I am always amazed when the teardrops fall...because sometimes they won't respond...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear magic Marge, this is beautiful. My teardrops are falling now...I miss my little Chipmunk. Thanks, I love you dearly lady. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you for your insight, Marge. For whatever reason the teardrop exists....to fall is indeed its destiny. INclan |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Beautiful Marge, in word and picture. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful words written by a smart lady. I really enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful, as well as the presentation.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The perfect poem for all of us who are crying over the loss of our beloved Lyra... Superbly done, Marge. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Marge..they are falling for me right now. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful words only you could compose, with a picture to match. Thank God we still have her poetry to keep us company. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge - I loved this! yes - only to fall hopefully to be quickly wiped away . . . xxoo nice job |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...beautifully expressed, as only you can... |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Very impressive to see the different graphic applications come into play with this piece. It makes for a complete sensory experience, the beautiful words notwithstanding. "A saline notion" That is vivid choice of words. Sadly touching lines. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge... your heart is showing.... and holding.... love. Thank you for this.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Marge! That's all they can do is fall. Just like mine are doing, now. Lyra was one of my dearest friends. We talked on the phone many times. And, oh how my heart hurts, now. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge~ Thanks for sharing. It is when we recall A friend too us all A teardrop will fall We come together one and all..... I bid you Farewell Lyra...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 HUGSSS you Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is quite beautiful. Quite, quite beautiful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ Your teardrops just spoke to mine, and called them out. Hugs to you, friend...lots of 'em.  You KNOW I love you, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What, indeed, Marge? Nicely said... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your words translated many hearts, thank you for sharing this one Marge. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, What indeed, except fall and be shared. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
... ~beautiful ... When you think you have heard it all, |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
My tearsdrups fall down for my dear friend Lady Chipmunk {Lyra}She is gone. Thank you Marge for the beuatiful poem. We all will missing her. [This message has been edited by Muys (03-19-2003 08:05 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Marge... Indeed...what is a teardrop to do.. She will be missed. ~Heart hugs~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So very beautiful, Marge... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, Beautiful ... God takes all our tears and holds them in preciously in His hand. Many tears fall for our beloved and dearly missed Lyra. Huggles, Marti |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This moves me. Wonderful write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Sincerest appreciated comments from each of you~ Vicky .... 'Your teardrops just spoke to mine, and called them out.' More... no poet could ask ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 for a friend~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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