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Fashioned from Time Backwards
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Fashioned from Time Backwards |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Fashioned from Time Backwards She had a name once before the calling of horses and the driftwood sink cracked crab hissed the fire then and she was in no hurry for winter she could see past the dune grass and there was light shining that stumbled into keep-safe and broke her memory slanted the sky that way sometimes she was a curved line down she looked with the color of new wood song her toes arrows that took her fast into the peat slipped cool familiar it didn’t matter now the words all too cumbersome to worry the day but in dark starry cool covered sand she would whisper something forgotten and press rewind and play [This message has been edited by Martie (02-22-2003 11:06 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Even your 'lines' here take on life..enjoyed the poetic imagery here  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you watch a rerun of CaveBears? Or... did you read, the Horse Goddess? Please...please...keep teaching me!  ...Martie...thank you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You amaze me. You truly do! You are one gifted poetess! I feel your poetry in my heart, my mind and my body! I live and breathe your words as I read them...Thank you for another enjoyable experience! Warm nighttime hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Martie, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly are a poet, as in poetry you can do anything, including hold time to your will and review! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a special friend in all our hearts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Martie, Each of your poems are so unique. You amaze me. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet. Ethereal. You breathe onto the page and it comes to life..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you leave me not knowing what to say sometimes Martie, except "beautiful"... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She had a name once before the calling of horses and the driftwood sink =============================== she could see past the dune grass and there was light shining that stumbled into keep-safe and broke her memory slanted the sky that way sometimes she was a curved line down she looked with the color of new wood song ====================================== it didn't matter now the words all too cumbersome to worry the day but in dark starry cool covered sand she would whisper something forgotten and press rewind and play ===================================== *shaking my head* this poem is cooler than I have words for... the imagery is as awesome as is the intend of the inspire... everytime I read you, I am reminded of all the things that make me adore and worship poetry so...that makes me need poetry. thank you for that memory slanted the sky that way sometimes but in dark starry cool covered sand she would whisper something forgotten and press rewind and play yesssssss....exactly  oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Superb! ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Martie! You have a way of taking the reader right there. This one is especially beaufiul! IWIHWT! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are amazing, Martie! Fabulous expression! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"she would whisper something forgotten and press rewind and play" yes... Martie, you rock |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'she was a curved line down she looked with the color of new wood song her toes arrows that took her fast into the peat slipped cool familiar it didn’t matter now the words all too cumbersome to worry the day but in dark starry cool covered sand she would whisper something forgotten and press rewind and play' I was just going to glance at this and read later but you had me from the first verse! I need to read you more oftenMartie...my bad. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie - simply wonderful yet again!! hugs to you dear poetess, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, dear friend, I can't think of anything to say that hasn't already been said....so, I'll just give you some flowers    Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Number four. |
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