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Open Poetry #18

This moment with you

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

0 posted 2002-02-10 01:31 AM

Spinning round and round,
Pulling and pushing his world,
into and from my mind.

Embracing each moment.
Embracing him within my heart.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

[This message has been edited by rebekah33 (02-10-2002 01:32 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-10 06:25 AM

Nice dance...I hope you don't get too dizzy.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-02-10 09:55 AM

Very nice rebekah,

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

3 posted 2002-02-10 09:58 AM

Rebekah,
Very nice.Hope it's a nice dance.
peaches

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-11 12:07 PM

two hearts embracing
dancing to the tune of life
for eternity

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-02-11 01:36 PM

around and around
two beating hearts
the only sound!

Nice!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-11 07:04 PM

kettledrums of love
warbling to a lovers sigh
kismet pirouette

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooo breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, may loves joy forever fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-02-19 11:57 AM

Rebekah~
This is stunning imagery~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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