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dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-02-12 12:46 PM

caged...
wild beast pounds me
to slow death
trying to get out
i fight for breath
only to find suffocation
the ceiling moves down
upon my head
pushing me to the floor
i try to resist
but strength is not in me...
     caged...
gasping...i need to breathe
i lie down on my back
easy to give up
here
on the bottom
          but keep watching
strength will come
     strength will come
when the poison tears
     finally escape...
i am here for a reason
on the bottom
     i catch my breath
     and push off
rocketing back to the top...
this rock bottom
cannot possess me

-dgvarner
2-12-02

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-12-2002 12:51 PM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-02-12 12:55 PM

HOORAY!
Atta girl!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-02-12 02:39 PM

the only is up now!!Bravo!:

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-02-12 03:11 PM

Dgvarner,
Good read, enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-12 03:20 PM

YAY!!! That's the spirit, sweet friend, we're all soooo proud of you and I know that you will find true joy and comfort and all your dreams will come true, for believing is the magic of them! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Jeffrey E. Osborne
Member

since 2001-11-01

Posts 160
out there

5 posted 2002-02-12 09:13 PM

Excellent! I love this! Beautifully written and very inspirational in it's expression.

Laters

- Jeff

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2002-02-13 07:10 AM

INTERLOPER..thank you!
ECRIVAN..thanks!
SEYMOUR..thank you too!
NOAH..and thanks to you..!
why thank you JEFFREY..and just where have YOU been lately?? lol

thanks for reading! rock bottom is not an easy place to be...but i think the glide down may be painful then the actual bottom...at least at the bottom, i have something to push off of..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2002-02-20 04:16 AM

Up is the only way to go!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2002-02-20 08:18 AM

thanks my EAGLE friend..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

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