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The Journey Of A Flame
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The Journey Of A Flame |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
 The crowd gathers in the chill of the morning Excitement and a sense of unity fill the air Freshly fallen snow sets the historic scene today As all eyes wait expectantly for just one glimpse What is it they anxiously await on a January morn? For the arrival of the one and only Olympic flame Today the torch relay shall pass through my town Bringing electricity through the air in minutes Each runner dressed in a crisp white and purple warm-up suit Holding an unlit torch as they await the flame’s arrival Once it gets to them, their torch is lit and the previous snuffed out For there is only one torch and one Olympic flame We stand at the edge of the crowd looking up the street To see if we can spot the Olympic caravan in the distance Until finally a small procession of vehicles enters the drive They move slowly and one announces the torchbearer is on the way Behind the last vehicle, is a lone runner proudly carrying the flame The crowd catches a glimpse of him and begins to slowly chant “USA, USA, USA” amongst applause and smiles of proud Americans The torch arrives for a brief stop right in front of us as we gaze in awe The sight of this spectacular event gives me goosebumps all over As emotions well up inside as I stand mesmerized by the flame For I know it has traveled so far from it’s home in Greece Where it resides steeped in tradition as it lies in wait for yet another journey This flame has seen things I can only imagine and wonder about So many momentous occasions in Olympic and world history It is in itself a symbol of peace and harmony in many countries Causing the world to pause for a brief time to set differences aside I came out here today because I knew this was a historic event And that I may never again get the chance to witness the flame In person along its journey to an Olympic destination Where the world will watch on television in awe and wonder I’ve always thought it was amazing to watch it travel on television But it is nothing like seeing it less than two feet in front of you In person, you understand and experience the true spirit of the Olympics May its brilliant light shine upon your path one day also Photo Courtesy of Robert Killips, photographer for the Lansing State Journal Newspaper All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (01-07-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!  I love the excitement of this whole event and you bring it to life perfectly. I love it!!! I love it.!!! **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, long live the flame of love and hope and may it burn with pride! Let the games begin!!! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great job LW. . . it was truly an event to be remembered. . . well done. . . hopefully, others will go out to see the flame in their states, towns, and cities as well. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great write, Lone Wolf. The torch passed near my home a few weeks ago, unfortunately I wasn't able to be there. Your poem captured what I believed I would have felt had I been able to see it. Enjoyed much! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well done, lady, I can see how this inspired you, we all need a flame once in awhile. Believe me, I know! Kathleen-- |
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Johnnie Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 27Indiana |
Hi Jennifer, I like this.... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Great poem!! It must have really been exciting to see it!!  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lone Wolf, Clap, Clap, great poem, loved reading it , floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHMYGOSH!! I had no idea it was coming that close to where I live! The weather was clear...I could have gone to see it...what a thrill it must have been for you!! This is wonderful!! Enjoyed so much. Hugs. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful timely piece, Lone Wolf. Many are wondering if the USA should ever host the Olympics again, due to security concerns. I am so happy that you've had a chance to vicariously participate. It really is awesome. And so is this poetic tribute to Unity, through sports. thanks! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LW, I have seen many...never in person.. and it is an awesome sight to watch...when enemies come together united in friendship.. You have brought the vision to us through your words.. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Startime: It was very exciting in person!! Thank you!! Noah: It was awesome and if you ever get an opportunity go, it's well worth it. Sven: Thank you much. I hope others get to experience what we did too. It's something I'll never forget. Duncan: Sorry you missed it, but glad I could bring it to you in some small way. Kathleen: Thank you! Yes, we all do need a flame. Johnnie: Thanks. Poet deVine: It was great to see firsthand. Thank you! strbbux: Thanks much. It was an emotional day. Nancy: It was a huge thrill and we enjoyed every minute of it. Perhaps you will get a chance to see it again sometime. Thank you! Midnitesun: I think security is always a concern at the games. They say trying to secure Athens will be even tougher. Hopefully we'll get another chance in the future. Thank you for your kind words. Magnus: The flame itself seems to hold magical powers. The feeling you get when you see it is remarkable. There is nothing like it. All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sorry I missed this ... it is 1derful! |
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