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Sleepy River Eyes (Bill Charles Challenge)
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Sleepy River Eyes (Bill Charles Challenge) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I see a sleepy river dancing within your eyes flowing within the channels of my soul a sweet fragrance of magnolia dances in the breeze a sleepy sapphire river flowing from your heart to mine it is just a matter of time soothing my ache for love your sleepy river eyes tantalizes me kissing ruby lips with budded mist of thee flowing over a waterfall into raging rivers of my heart embers of fireflies serenade midnight skies while sleepy river swans dance within your eyes You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-04-2002 12:52 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Victoria! This is exquisite! Bill will love it I'm sure. Challenge well met! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...you never cease to amaze me with what you can make of such a sleepy little subject...Challenge well met. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Nancy...i enjoyed the challenge..hugs  Barry..thank you so much..appreciate your kind comments |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yep! This is a good one! Challenge well met. Just love those sleepy rivers. So romantic. ((Victoria)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I loved the entire piece, but embers of fireflies serenade midnight skies while sleepy river swans dance within your eyes really is beautifully formed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are the absolute queen of imagery, Victoria...  This is so very beautiful! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ In complete AWE of this.... beautiful....Lauren~ Step through the |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
newell...thank you so much..have super sunday annie..thank you annie...glad you enjoyed hon madame..thank you very much for your lovely compliments lauren...thank you Lauren..pleased you enjoyed...i enjoyed the challenge |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always cascade like waterfalls in your heart, this is a beautiful challenge that I just know Bill will love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...this poem is absolutely stunning...Bill will just love it...Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you noah...hugss karen...thank you very much karen...always nice to hear from you ..hugss |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - I did miss this and I don't know how I did. This is magnificent, and flows with the sleepy river. Excellent, excellent. BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It was fun writing and thank you for the challenge bill ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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