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Sangria Lips |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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His honey maple hair blows within the bayou sangria lips taste of satin sheets sweet cocoa eyes dance like sequoia trees swimming within a creamsicle sunset A Palomino tan galloping over his skin luscious as succulent wild berries An orange blossom dawn bathes within sunlight of his kiss medleys of potpourris linger upon passionate parfaits of the morn You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-05-2002 09:25 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Sensually stunning...a magnificent poem...I love the vision it gave me  **big hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love the imagery  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Your gorgeous words are always as sweet as parfets, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your dreams are gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ I love the use of sangria, what a perfect way to describe lips.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"a golden tan like a Palomino galloping over his skin" too cool....I love that line....  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria, when I see your name I can't wait to come in and see what you have done. Now Sangria lips, darlin how do you think up these wonderful things.. sweet sangria. lovely, floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I always feel like I have had a sensuous desssert after reading your poems Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your imagery is always so unbelievably awesome, Victoria....I hope they don't get too drunk on those Sangria lips.  Beautifully written as usual copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you karen..glad you enjoyed..have a parfait on me interloper...thank you so much..and for peeking in noah..thank you sweet one...  thank you Lauren..appreciate your visit hugss thank you sea.i did end up changing some words in the poem..but he still has a palomino tan ha.. floria..thank you so much..and for your sweet support hugs sandra..thank you..Pleased you enjoy my words.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet and lovely...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you madame..i wouldnt might getting just a tiny bit dizzy haa...  James...thank you so much James..nice of you to peek in tonight |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - this is great, like it a lot. Sangria Lips, h'mmmmmmm... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you bill..will have to find some sangria lips ha..glad you liked ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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