Open Poetry #16 |
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What Is In The Heart - The Letter - Finale - Part 12 |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The Letter – What Is In The Heart – Finale – Part 12 There came a day unto her she went to her burled wood box from the chain she took the key and turned it in the lock she read again her letters from the love of her life then looked upon her wedding ring for ever to be, his wife she thought again of the son she bore of his need to find the man who was to him his father gone then left to search all lands her maid had stayed by her side, with her lady gazed o’er horizons vast until she succumbed, now with death belonged lo all these long years past now she alone had to face this time held aloft this letter sent neither the hand of the man she loved nor of the son that went but in the script of a woman who had loved her son so dear she read again the words aloud so as if her spirit should hear “My Dear Lady, the Light, the Life’s blood of the man I held please read these words I would send for I would relate the tale I found your son a’wandering his countenance so very pale he rambled of some story about the seas he sailed his fever ravaged his spirit his soul would not be bound he looked for a man, ‘though surely this man was never found while in the grasp of this fever his eyes burned a brown so true and then he spoke of his M’mere so, Lady, I write to you,” The Lady oh, she read the words her heart was twisted, sore she knew without her reading here her loves were gone e’remore “My Lady, the Light, the Beacon a confession, please, read on I believe the man your son did seek was the father of your son. Several years gone since the time a man came to our shores he spoke of lovely, handsome lands and then he spoke of more he spoke of a Lady, his true love those who heard, were sore, indeed that a man should be so blessed, ‘tis true they would rob him of his seed late one night under skies so dark the scoundrels lay in wait they very near killed your love so filled were they with hate ne’ermore did he speak of the lands he left behind for the very beating he took left him bereft of mind” The Lady felt her tears falling her Love, near beat to death still, the words were calling as she read, she held her breath, “The man you called your husband knew nothing of his past, my mother gave him comfort and in turn, my life, he grasped he died soon after my day of birth his bones rest now in a grave years passed, we mourned ever his worth but a few keepsakes we had saved one small treasure, this emblem ‘tis his seal you know, m’dear and then, these scraps of paper must be your words, he held ever near, ‘M’sir, m’love, my dear heart ‘tis only a matter of days before you return to my dear heart that we would share our loving ways’ for though he could not remember he still knew the love of his life and he would have returned to you for you were his truthful wife I knew your Son, though he knew me not I could see the love in his eyes for I carry the brown of our father’s seed and I cried when my brother died so with great sadness, O m’Lady, it is with heavy heart I write but your husband and son are here and I hold their memories tight” With a cry, her heart always knowing the Lady walked down to the Sea “Come and take me, my husband” and a dove cooed, “Walk with me.” ![]() Thank you all for your patience in the postings of this series. It evolved on its own, and sometimes, the Muse who guided the pen, played a bit of hide and seek. For Your Reading Pleasure, Part 1 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001258.html Part 2 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001266.html Part 3 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001453.html Part 4 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001464.html Part 5 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001574.html Part 6 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001640.html Part 7 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001661.html Part 8 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001721.html Part 9 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001883.html Part 10 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001889.html Part 11 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001955.html |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and now my collection is complete... and this series...I have tucked away to read in order when time allows me to savor each one.... me thinks a snow covered night in front of the fire will be perfect... me also thinks I wont be able to wait that long LOL ![]() thank you to thy Muse poetess WhiteLady jm This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful tapestry of love you have woven in these dozen delights. *S* I've enjoyed so much... and will savor often. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Lady; I, like others have been caught up in this tale of love and loss...but, in doing so, have also watched you pen quite a masterpiece! This series is truly remarkable, and never will be forgotten by this reader, as well as many many others. Although I know we had all hoped for a happier ending...but, I believe this one is just 'perfect'. As we know they don't always live 'happily ever after'. I cannot thank you enough for the enjoyment you have given so many with this story. ~warm heartfelt hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Lady..you have made me shed tears over this story...so well done!!!! The ending is pefect, but so sad. Standing ovation!! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh My! You not only made me cry but you came up with an ending I never would have suspected in a million years. I thought the ending was going to be that a poor, lonely old woman and maid, (like in Sunset Boulevard) just fade into reading the letters again, with no answer as to where her husband or son had gotten to. Oh my! There is a daughter though! Well, then...now is she coming to meet her, is she going there (nope, our lady is now too old), perhaps this is another series about the adventures of the daugther? Pleeeeeease??? Oh Lady, thank you for this series, now may I suggest you write a book and let us know when it is published, so we may buy it. Mz. Steele, look out "Lady is in town!" BRAVO. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I for one, appreciate the hard work and time you put into these. They are wonderful. You have a fine talent and this one is., well, gosh, it's just superb! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely beautiful and Stunning writing Lady. This is tucked safely in the treasure chest and will be pulled out for reading in the future. Well done indeed sweet poetess. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
AUTHOR! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear Lady....such tears...at least she knows...the ending of her life's mystery Some peace is now in her heart. And a legacy of love round the world. You did this so well that I will never forget it. It is etched within my heart. Bravo for talent..Bravo for making me feel for a character...Bravo! Sincerely, Regina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh, as I read the tears still fall. So many years she waited. You have give this magnificent story an ending that none would have ever thought of. STUNNINGLY BEAUTIFUL. Thank you so very much for writing such a beautiful story. I LOVE IT.......!!! ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh, I am crying....this is such a heartwrenching story you have told.... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Greatly enjoyed each tenderly posted piece~ Nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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