Open Poetry #16 |
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A lady of many colors |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
For every lady poet who ever dreamed in color and wrote of it...this is for you! (And of course for the men also ![]() ![]() My words, an emerald plea Give voice along the paths where lilies die, you may not die, you are my own! Each thought be my rosette upon the sea through mauve mislaid eternity. Ov'r moving sky let wanderings be- my words, my painted words! Oh, I will carve you in the maple deep within the oak! Pale lavender, my breath take heed, return to me the words I spoke! But please, oh please, take ax to words that sting and burn. Into fire, the quenching fire! And ones that decorated wind in watercolor- blue within they drift and swirl and dissipate. but words so cruel and full of hate are spiritually, my enemy- for once they brushed, disfigured thee. The wind may burn, the lilies spread but words! They left me once for dead But now I live and live alone breathing from a wall of stone. To speak my words, cerulean shine my words, my very own, and mine? And if they be not mine? They die alone to brutal stoneā¦ I shall dig the grave I'll dig the grave- for not my words my words to save. artwork: allutiiq art museum -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- Anna [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o awesome parting words to a fine poem yuh yuh |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Lady, many of us view color as an extension of poetry, and in this, I must applaud, a write well done...thank you for this... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
The beauty of you poem and perfection of the graphic came to life with a brilliant vision as I read your words. I dream in color always so I thank you for this poem and it beautiful colors. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perfection. . . very well done. . . you made me see you, sitting there, just painting your colored words. . . filling the canvas of the page. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lady...excellent write...vivid colours...just loved it!! ~NancyLee~ |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yet another lovely painting in words. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I guess I'm kind of a woman in a man's body, for I love to dream in color all the time! (big hugggsssssss) With my Rainbow Dancer, I always love to make rainbows and cross them into fantasy worlds of nature, true love, and fantasy. (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I think I shall tuck this one in my library....'tis a keeper.... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a colorful poem, and a dreamy picture to accompany it. Well done, poetess! Sometimes my dreams are in color, sometimes in starkly contrasted black and white, but always with colorful words floating around. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A beautiful picture complimented by this beautiful, eloquent poem! Cor |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Wayoutwalt - and a yuh yuh to you also and thank you for reading! Decaflame, I feel that way too, it is an extension isn't it? Thank you for reading and replying. Startime-if it created a vision for you I'm pleased. Thank you! Sven, good, that's the effect I wanted, to have you see it. Thank you! NancyLee, thank you so much! Chris, I'm glad you read and took the time to reply, thank you Noah, well you have a wonderful gentle spirit! Thank you for reading! Sunshine, I'm happy you liked this one, thank you! Mitnitesun: I looked forever for this graphic! Thank you! Corinne, Thank you for replying! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady of Shallot- Very cool write! I really enjoyed this one. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
This is wonderful work, I applaud you !!!!! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Vicky, Robert, thank you both! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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