Open Poetry #16 |
The Letter - What a Heart Will Hear - Part 7 |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The Letter – What A Heart Will Hear – Part 7 There are times, in caliginous hours a heart’s burden becomes of such weight as to crush all that is good in us we would flail helplessly at that which we cannot see, nor that which we cannot control, yet see it, and control it, we would… bitterness would rise and choke what life remains in us, if not for our heart a heart, it’s very stroke, tell us we must go on, for to give in to lesser temptations, those evils that surround us each day, is to walk away from all that which is good it is to leave that which we know, and where our love finds us again She knew this, in the days that she grieved, and came to that decision which she knew came from her heart… for she knew her heart, and its render, she knew it as well as she knew his, and she knew his still beat, and that the very line of him, “M’lady, m’love, my dear heart ‘tis only a matter of days before I return to your dear heart to share with you loving ways” would come true, for if he were truly missing, and dead, as the Captain’s letter inked stark jet before her eyes, her heart would know, and as it decried otherwise, she would wait, for her love would come, soon, it might be from the east, or even from the west, but she would hear his footsteps, and would run to him, for he bore her soul, and he would, as promised, return with it, and she would hold herself whole again in his arms… so she would look to the horizon, and read his hope in all of the missives received from months gone by, and she would believe, in him. For Your Reading Pleasure, Part 1 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001258.html Part 2 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001266.html Part 3 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001453.html Part 4 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001464.html Part 5 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001574.html Part 6 ~ /pip/Forum51/HTML/001640.html [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good for her |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lady...as the tears stream down my cheeks. I have never been so moved by anything in Passions until this series. This is and has been a unique experience...one that shall not be forgotten. For this, I thank you. ~Hugs, Nancy~
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--perfection! and so I just know |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm speechless. Your wisdom is so profound and your words so gentle a teacher. I know I believe for her right now. I loved this so much...Thank you for sending this "Letter" to our hearts. I have saved each one and will read them over and over in hope. Sincerely, Regina |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This mini-series of love and devotion is absolutely wonderful, and romantic. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
My heart beats with her filled with hope as tears steam from my eyes. This story touches me so very deeply every time I am blessed to read another part of it. STANDING OVATION FOR THE HEART OF A LADY WHO HAS FAITH IN LOVE. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It isn't over - he has to come back, for I believe he will. I'll just wait patiently now for Part 8 - as 7 is a lucky number and I know with a love this strong he has to make it. Does he? This was brilliant writing but it can't be over yet, can it? Beautiful work and when you write for first book be sure to tell me when it is in the bookstores so I can rush out and get my copy. Thank you for this wonderful series. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
The pictures were lovely... the poetry: perfection! I can't wait for the rest of the saga! *sigh and swoon* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You pack so much wisdom into the first 5 verses... and so much hope into the whole. Each link in this chain is a strong one, Lady. *S* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
and out on the waves she heard him at last, his call now so familiar, "I'm a comin' Beanie!!!" oops - Sorry Karilea, my old TV nostalgia got to me there This is such a sweet reading you've given us. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow.......am coming back at lunch to read them all.....exquisite lady.....very nicely done |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so beautiful! I just fall right into these |
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