Open Poetry #16 |
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A Diamond In The Rough |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
A priceless polished gem to some, to others not. A diamond ever in the rough, his mother thought A quizzical boy, challenging and defiant too keeping her on her toes, wondering what to do Carved of a mold, unique in his own way. A diamond being slowly polished each day. Dogs and things of four legs welcome in the yard A heart of gold, diamond skin, goodbyes so hard Walks upon the shifting sands in search of treasures new. Talks of tales, distant roars, he certainly had a few. Sometimes laughing, sometimes sad, trying to be tough. Forever caring, not long mad, seldom ever had enough. Living life freely as a wanderer on a darkened trail. Struggling so to make ends meet, wishing not to fail. Loving all his children as much as he did each pet. Challenging right and wrong, making his mother fret. Playing Pinochle through the night, waking late to eat. Talking on a computer phone, resting two tired feet. Staying ever close to family as each day passed by. Always watching over things with a caring eye. You are no longer this diamond in the rough. A son, brother, father, uncle and cherished friend Standing beside our Savior in eternal life...... Now a deeply polished gem. (note): I read this at a memorial service for my Brother In Law Ronald Hewitt. Ron died 2 weeks ago of Terminal Cancer. He was 53. He is missed by us all. His mother asked me to write a poem about him. This depicts him well. I have a second that I will post shortly. Please do not feel I am trying to hog the board. I just want to share. I hope you enjoy it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I am truly sorry for your loss...but, I do hope that you can find peace knowing that he is with God, just like you beautifully stated in the last stanza ![]() This is so moving, I'm almost in tears here, the ending is just so beautiful. You have a powerful gift, thank you for sharing. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Melissa....Yes, he is with the Lord....and so much better of than when he was here in his last days. We miss him, but we are happy he is with our Lord. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* my heart goes out to your family for your loss. This is a beautiful dedication that quickly brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing it with me. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes...this was a moment in my life where I feel my poetry spoke volumes....I know Ron would have been pleased with it. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Very tenderly done~ Prayers are sent for your family in this loss~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Marge...we have had much support from friends during these last weeks.... |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
((HUGS)) What a beautiful tribute to your brother in law! You can never hog the board, you are simply sharing with all of your friends here : ) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Some things are meant to be shared. My father passed of cancer July 19...I know it sounds trite, but I feel your pain. HUGS. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So beautiful! I actually prefer rough diamonds to polished, as they somehow seem closer to the truth of the stone, as did your heartfelt tribute to your brother-in-law. Peace and condolences, dear friend. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, A fitting tribute. 53 is way too young to die. I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem I'm sure brought comfort to the family and hopefully to you. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Magnus, my heart goes out to you and yours. A beautiful write, and never feel sorry for sharing. We would have it no other way. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A tribute that I am sure his mother took to her heart. Well done, Sir... |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
You have my deepest condolences on your loss. May God give you peace. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I won't list your names.....I will say THANK YOU VERY MUCH for all of your kind thoughts. Yes, my Mother In Law very much treasures this poem. I have framed it, given it to her. It will remain both in her home and her heart forever. It will remain in mine as well. Thanks again. You have been so wonderful. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
WONDERFUL, TOUCHING, I am adding this to my personal collection ![]() You are so very talented and thank you for sharing that talent with us all. God Bless and be with you and your family † LITL, Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Magnus Such a heartfelt piece of writing. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Heather and Sue...all of your warm remarks are deeply appreciated. |
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