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Puzzled |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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We first search as we start picture this, a scene thought find a match, fit a part rolling hills as they fought comments fly, some may cheat piece by piece the board clears who may hurt as ends meet taking form raising fears A meadow becomes seen ice so forms over love as its fields become clean the puzzle, like a glove fit to end all thats seen piece by piece the board clears trees grown deep and between tender blades bending fears Often seen not to see for any two sides tried the picture most rarely only one not denied fitting to mounting fears piece by piece the board clears the scene new as end nears atleast found, lost in tears [This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is a lovely picture! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely wonderful. This poem is picture perfect with every piece of the puzzle in its place. BRAVO!!!Well done. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you both for your comments. This is a more personal piece with a message to heart and may not be understood. But yet it seems to show how irregularity still has its place. It fit its purpose, thank you again. |
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