Open Poetry #13 |
A Lady's Favor |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
she gave to me this swatch of red as we left the city to meet the cursed enemy in battle 'fight bravely this day Sir Knight' she said as she tied the swatch to my arm 'fight bravely and may God be with thee. . . then, when battle is over and victory is won return to me, before the setting of the sun' 'I thank thee for thy favor Lady Fair' said I as I stopped to accept her gift 'and on my honor and by my sword I pledge to thee that in thy name I shall fight this day until no longer doth the enemy abide until our lands are once again free and when battle is over and victory is won I shall return to thee, before the setting of the sun' she smiled, and in her eyes of green I saw the heart of this Lady Fair a heart as red as the band on my arm a heart that beat with a love for all time a heart that I would gladly give my life for a life that I would gladly give my heart for across the field, there they appeared the cursed enemy in all of the wretched glory taunting us with cries of 'Cowards!' daring us to fight then came the order to charge touching the swatch one final time, I gave a prayer pledging my life, and this fight to God and this Lady Fair on and on the battle raged comrade and enemy both fell by point of arrow and of sword but in my mind, her eyes of green drove me on and the swatch of red 'round my arm seemed to beat with the love in her heart giving me the strength to fight and the will to go on 'return to me before the setting of the sun' the last of the cursed enemy now vanquished we returned to the castle, the battle won but we came back just as came the setting sun I rushed to find her in her home she was there, but dying and quite ill poisioned by water the enemy had tainted her color gone, save for eyes of green 'thou hast returned to me, my Knight, my love. . . and with those words, she breathed her last and her soul returned to our God above now, preparing for another battle I place the swatch of red 'round my arm and again I offer the prayer pledging my life and this fight to my God and to my Lady Fair for now I fight not for Kingdom or God above but for a Lady's Favor and a Maiden's love. . . Art: A Lady's Favor or God Speed Edmund Blair Leighton, 1900 ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most wonderful, O Sir Sven... Masterly writing... Regards, Sudhir |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
oh, what wonderful writing! the romantic comes through loud and clear. truly enjoyed reading this one, Sven, nice work! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Nice and sad story here Sven. Thy pen names thee as Knight of Swoon, for all the maidens shall do so upon reading this. You are my knight and I am your esquire. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sir Sven, would thou speakest to me in this, thy tongue of yesterday, so that I may again....live? 'Tis knightly of you, kind Sir, to cherish this, thy words of olde, that we all might stop, and relish in the light of Camelot... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh beautiful.......the awe of love! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, I love this type of poem. You did such a great job. You make me feel the fight and the death of your fair lady. Enjoyed! ME |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* One of your best, sir. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Come on, Sven, more like this...more like this one. Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sudhir, I thank thee fellow Knight for thy words. . . with a tip of mine sword to thee. . . tradewind, I am glad that thou didst enjoy my work. . . thanks also to thee. . . Poetic Knight, I thank thee for the title that thou hast bestowed upon me. . . but surely Sir, thou art a Knight in thine own right??? Lady in White, indeed wouldst I speak to thee in the tounge of olde so that thou wouldst relive with me, the loves and tales of a time long gone, yet ever present. . . a thousand thanks to thee gentle Lady. . . Just a Woman, indeed the awe of love that hast inspired poet and painter since the dawn of time. . . thanks to thee. . . Mother Earth, glorious Gaia, I thank thee for thy words as I have tried to tell the story of my lost love so that she might live for all time. . . Temptress, I would like to thank thee for thy words. . . and implore thee to return soon, for there are many more stories to be told. . . Lady Kathleen, indeed gentle Lady, there will be more like this, telling the stories of olde. . . for thy enjoyment. . . thanks to thee. . . An aside: If the image does not appear to thee in thy browser. . . please direct thy browser to this link. . . http://www.uidaho.edu/student_orgs/arthurian_legend/gallery/l_img/l_fvr.jpg. . . to see the glory that inspired this tale. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh Sir Knight, a man on his steed, has always made my heart skip a beat. "for now I fight not for Kingdom or God above but for a Lady's Favor and a Maiden's love. . . A gentleman in the past as well as the present. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maiden's haire of red red sun thou wouldst be for me, sweet one I shall tarry not, but victory won back to you, then shall I come |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, this is my favorite theme, the days of knights and ladies faire...And the picture was so perfect for the poem. I cannot believe what happens when I am off here for a week. All of a sudden everyone is in #13! Take care. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2B, gentle Lady, I thank thee for thy words as always and for thy thoughts of me now and of when I was then. . . Sunshine of Skye, indeed Lady most bright, thou hast always known just what words to say. . . thanks for thy words. . . Lady Sandra, thou shouldst know that events moveth like quicksilver here. . . but I thank thee for thy words, knowing that thou dost enjoy the time of Lords and Ladies and Knights and Damsels as much as I. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, this is an enchanting tale, my friend. I have long been a great admirer of Leighton's work, and am delighted to see what an inspiration his "Godspeed" has been to you. Consequently, when I first read your lovely poem this afternoon, I daresay it inspired me to write one of my own. I will post it now, and please accept my thanks for such wonderful inspiration. Take care, Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh.........wow..........Sven.....this is just.....wow..... SEA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved this, and you know I'm a sucker for this style. Well done friend. Peace. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This IS lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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