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thoughts on a cliche
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thoughts on a cliche |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Nay, the grass may not be greenier on the other side but the sky is definitely bluer and the widened eyes turn resolutely unblinking All the better to absorb bliss with |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Cool! Really creative look on what we see as cliches. I liked this a lot.  ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very creative...great imagery useage with meaning...i liekd it...thanks for sharing it and keep writing  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done here....I really thought you did well on this one. Looking forward to more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
great poem.... it was really great, and I hope to hear more!! or read more, whatever!!  *s* Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
I like this a lot! I always say that in poetry, you've got to avoid cliche like the plague.... "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you....while i was travelling, i was constantly amazed at how beautiful the skies were and how i never actually bothered to appreciate the skies back home... that led to this musing and yup, i strive to admire the clouds always ahh, the simple things in life... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice. The clouds give the best inspiration for poems. Indeed, the simple things in life. Well done. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I'm laughing now.. this is so.. neat! ^_^ Enjoyed muchly Kai Le.. thanx for putting this link in the Poetry Haven.. “One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well i must say this is a first ive ever read in passions :-/ well hey keep up the good work its a really good poem *Tears of love* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you for your comments... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now this....is good |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
Very nice outlook . This is great*One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
SEA and Meggie, i am glad you enjoyed this musing... because i always strive to look at things from an unique outlook...[This message has been edited by faterider (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, I realised that too. The grass might not be greener, but the skies are bluer!! Always so clear and cloudless here, that's the only thing I don't miss about home.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmmm, thinking of submitting this for Reflections |
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