Teen Poetry #4 |
Dark Angel: The After Sting ( 2 of 11 ) |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Again, this is not about me but a fictional girl. Though these things didn't really happen to this person they do to others which is one of the reasons this story needs to be told. Do you know what pain is? really do you know? This is pain Pain is when your beaten day after day by your own father Pain is when your heart aches and never will stop Pain is What I feel everyday Pain is what I live on I have no rest This is pain "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i agree whole-heartedly...child abuse is one of the sickest things that can happen and if awareness can be raised, then why not? write on! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hey...this was quite powerful...hit me hard...and child abuse is a sad thing that goes on in society...and the victims usually go unknown...and you expressed it so well...awesome job...thanks for sharing this ...hope to see more... ...? ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I agree. Child abusers are scum. About the poem, though--i really like the abrupt nature of the peace, it adds a sort of violence...which, goes a long way to convey your message. yay for you! Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was raw. It was good, I liked it a lot. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
this is my favorite of the series so far. this things rock! it's seriously pissing me off though that they're banning some of them...sorry about that. keep writing even if they do block some of them! -fear- |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
There is nothing worse than parents that abuse their children. You're expressing yourself well. Keep 'em coming. ~AF~ "I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist." |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awww this is sad..I wonder what is to come?? U'r gonna do 11 of these?? Whoa.. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ok..im crying now |
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