Dark Angel: The Forgotten One ( 3 of 11 )

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Teen Poetry #4

Dark Angel: The Forgotten One ( 3 of 11 )

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-05-26 09:36 PM

She struggles
her life is a living hell
none to help her
on her pain they dwell
Walking on her path
walking in the blistering heat
Blood is pouring down her face
now she can barely see
What is to become of her?
What will she ever be?
She is the forgotten
and she is only me

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-26 09:58 PM

This was well done. I liked this one just like your other 2. Your series is very interesting.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-26 10:14 PM

great job...i really liked this one...as the whole series are fictional but you write it so well as it was your own...i'm really looking toward for future poem...and the otehr one i read also befor eit got locked it was very powerful and i liked it but it got locked...keepw riting though...

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ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-05-27 07:59 AM

Out of the three I've read, this one would have to be the most intense so far. The pictures I got in my head gave me chills.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

"I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist."
Manson - The Fight Song

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-05-27 11:54 AM

I really want to see what ends up happening, and why the title is "Dark Angel" so please post the other ones!!

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-28 09:45 PM

sumhow i dont want to read on...this is so chillingly real i cant believe you're not writing from experience

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