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Passions in Poetry!! |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i look at the world around me, they see me not, the ones passing by. Their minds only going on instinct, there is not enough time to here my cry! The sky a deep gray, the ground cracked and dry. There seems to be an order, the only thing i can think to say is why! Why won't these people listen? Why won't they stop to look? Why are their minds set on only on thing? A different path is what i took! To walk through life with my mind open, taking it all in, and wiring it down in poetry, not to hide it for myself within. just showing my town isn't enough so i post it up for the world to see, so people can read my stuff and all thanks to passions in poetry!!  thanks to all of you who read my poetry it really means a lot to me. you people are the only ones that really like my poetry. so thanks Ron and all of the monitors and every one that has replied to my poetry. somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You're welcome. You can start repaying me by not including "please read" in the title of all of your poems. Thanks for a nice tribute to all the repliers. ^_^ Always a pleasure. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Double post? Internal server error? What...? Sorry... [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
good poem. enjoy it here. regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The rest of the world does seem dark compared to our little poetic haven, doesn't it? You describe it well. Wonderful tribute, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Geez, LuvBug... take a rest. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You ok LoveBug? Do you need a nap? Thanks for the post, and all of your posts  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ok guys something is terribly wrong with this post.....cuz it leads you to an INTERNAL SERVER ERROR........if you get there......don't worry....just keep on going...cuz then you'll suffer through what allan, lovebug, and I did........IT's a TRICK I TELL YOU! A TRICK!  [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*stares at lovebug* 9 posts?...........wow....she REALLY liked this one!! geesh! Maybe I oughta do that sometime! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*stares at lovebug* 9 posts?...........wow....she REALLY liked this one!! geesh! Maybe I oughta do that sometime! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*stares at lovebug* 9 posts?...........wow....she REALLY liked this one!! geesh! Maybe I oughta do that sometime! OK SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH THIS THREAD!!! It has an internal server error or something!!! HEY!!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad you feel this way about PIP. I think we all do appreciate was Ron has offered us  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad you feel this way about PIP. I think we all do appreciate was Ron has offered us I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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