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Over You |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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When the time comes that i can smile and make it real i'll know im over you the day my heart starts to ache and learns to love again i'll know im over you when my dreams become reality and my wishes come true i'll know im over you when i can look at you with the twinkle in my eye i'll know im over you when my crying stops and my tears are dry i'll know im over you when my heads held high and my heart sings ill know im over you when pigs can fly and the cow jumps over the moon i'll know im over you The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here..........it's hard getting over somebody....but it's possible...eventually.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
your last lines got to me As already said, yes it is hard to get over someone Time is the only one that can help you that's if you help yourself too beautiful poem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
How did I miss this one? Well done. The last few lines magnified the unlikelihood of the previous events. Good job. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Oh, I'm sure you'd be over this person before pigs can fly  A cow flying, on the other hand, won't be as bad...I saw that over the summer. Hehehe..I went to this Awsome place called "Enchanted Castles Studio". It was AWSOME...but now I'm just rambling on...Love the poem !!!www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, good job on this one, I sensed where you were going with it. I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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