Open Poetry #12 |
When People Touch |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
When People Touch it's been proven yes, it's confirmed woven in our senses long past ages learned is the importance of touch something needed so much not to be used as a crutch but just the loving feel of touch touch doesn't have to be skin to skin nor does touch have to be kin to kin and neither does touch have to be thought as sin for the kindest touch is that within if my thoughts are to touch upon you on what you say, or what you do or if my touch of word can carry you through please accept my touch as I give it to you a letter might touch your voice says much a written note or two will more than make do if flowers are sent or a kind word spent then we know feelings are lent and we know what one meant share… share your care take a dare and write cast away shadows with your light touch and be touched give, and receive much for every action, a reaction in kind especially when you touch one's mind but when you touch one's private heart you've given of love that will not depart so if I reach out and softly touch you then know that you have touched me, too… write with grace, all others lose face; "Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Lady...this is very special..and it touches me! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is very beautiful yes, touch....... SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInFriendship~ And this little Cherokee has been touched by the spirit of you many times. This is exquisite ! Touching you with *HUGS* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
From a guy who has been considered touched most of his life....I agree! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful, and so very true. Wonderful writing! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Well you sure touched me. *L* Wonderful write |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this reminds me of a rick springfield song.... ... really enjoyed this one! we do indeed all need human touch! cant live without it hugs, g PERFECTION has no CHARACTER... -unknown |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow, gotta add my touch here too no really this is beautiful...enjoyed it much |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
touch me in the morning ...(any other time too) LiW - absolutely beautiful |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Well, you have all certainly touched this poet with your responses. Thank you. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Awesome poem. I was touched by it. Red |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this! *S* A wonderful description of the ways we're touched... "the kindest touch is that within"... amen! *S* Great work! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You are all very, very kind...thank you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your touch was felt gently in my heart softly in my mind peacefully in my soul... and has brought forth a poem I shall post from these thoughts...of yours ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
This poem speaks volumes Lady In White!! Truth and wisdom penned in the most beautiful of poetic verse, I loved it!! If you are interested I have a picture that brought tears to my eyes which proves the honesty of your verse, if you are interested in my sending it, e-mail me and I will forward it to you. Brian [This message has been edited by Brian Beaudry (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Wynter, Brian, thank you both. Brian, Sir, I imagine the picture you are speaking of are the hands with the small baby in them...am I correct? It is a lovely photo, one that I treasure. Thank you again. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Amazing how one can be touched, with just some simple word placement.... Very good, it touched me. Bernie Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice... enjoyed muchly. |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
The picture I mentioned was taken at a sick children's hospital and is of two premature babies, one very strong, the other was quite weak.The nurse disreguarded hospital procedures and put the two babies together, the strong one put its arm around the weaker one as if trying to protect it,immediately the sick one started improving.This is a true story and when I received this pic it brought tears to my eyes.You are so right in the power of touch!! |
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HappyPretender Junior Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 38Prince George, VA |
This is a beautiful poem!!! i love it. i even sent it to my b/f. its so sweet. keep writing, you're really good at it! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...so if I reach out and softly touch you then know that you have touched me, too... "Yes". Melton |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
My dearest Lady, You have touched this souls heart with this lovely poetry thank you so very much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Pickering8 Junior Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 10Redlands California |
I can only say one thing, wonderful. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Hey.. we are all touching each other in a way by using these forums!! It's been good touching you, Lady in White. :-) |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was so very beautiful! I loved it! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved the whole poem. It is all so true. Sometimes we fail to realize how we've touched someone.And you certainly have with your poetry. This is wonderful! LIz |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
SOULS HAVE BEEN TOUCHED MAN THAT MIGHT BE A UNDERSTATEMENT I DONT REALLY KNOW WHAT TO SAY CUZ I ALREADY FEEL OUT OF PLACE SINCE I AM THE ONLY THUG IN THIS PLACE.I QUESS IT IS JUST HARD 2 RAISE ABOVE IT. |
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