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go fly a kite (Mark's challenge)
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go fly a kite (Mark's challenge) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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go fly a kite while the breeze is just right, and cotton clouds soften the sun take in the beauty of flowers and trees ... listen as the sweet songs of birds fill ..... the ..... air, singing their praises to heaven above when life is so c r a z y and y o u r mind's in a whirl j u s t take s o m e time a n d go f l y a k i t e -vlraynes < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAY WAY COOL...hey I LOVE your tail LOL very imaginative poem..wonderful imagery great job .... take care jm |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
viraynes, It's obvious the wind caught your fancy in this little piece and you lifted poetry to new heights. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
where's my kite string...here it is... where's my comics, there they are, balsa wood, a piece of twine c'mon all, it's flying time well done, and a challenge well met! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Catching a breeze and flying high you are. Wonderful. I just love when the poets come out to shine. You did and excellent job on verse and graphic and now well just "GO fly a KITE" or something will ya? LOLOL....  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
vlraynes, I have to agree with kethry when she says she loves your tail  I like this fun poem and I'm glad I stopped in ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Glad to see you caught the winds of inspiration ! WONDERFULLY DONE ! Now ... you've got the fire ! ! ! Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
And a lovely kite it is.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Vicky! What a fun challenge this is ... you met it beautifully with this creative piece, really well done!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Janet Marie- thanks so much for the enthusiastic reply. so glad you enjoyed this. kethry- wow...thanks for the wonderful response. glad you like this. sunshine- lol...you have a great time flying that kite. thanks so much for your the joyful response. mark- lol...yeah...maybe i will just go fly a kite...or something...care to join me? thanks for the encouraging words, and for a really fun challenge.  rosepetals25- i'm glad you stopped in too. really glad you enjoyed this. Marge, my friend- wow! coming from you, the 'queen of creativity', these words mean so much. thank you so much for the enthusiasm and encouraging words. Victoria- glad you like it. thanks for reading. kit- thank you so much. you've put a smile on my face with your kind words. yes, this was a really fun challenge. gladyou enjoyed this. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great! I like this one. Kites should be at the top! (click) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
HEEHEE!! i love this tricks! how cool!! lets do--lets do go fly a kite!! wouldnt that be fun..just stop in the middle of everything and go play for a while... great job on this one!! (you'll have to teach me this formatting stuff!) hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautifully done! And a very cute poem to go with the presentation I love kites and loved the poem Liz |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
insect- lol...thank you. glad you like this. dg- got my kite and string...ready when you are, so let's go fly a kite...lol really glad you like this. thanksfor the enthusiastic response. (((hugs))) elizateth- thanks so much for the kind response. really glad you enjoyed this. love you all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Go get 'em ... cool breeze !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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