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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-10 12:10 PM

The dalliance of the day
winks before me
as the butterflies
dance across the
golden pebbled sands

you in the mirror
of my heart
reflecting my desire
to sunbath naked
only for the touch
of the winds lips
and your imagination

the cotton of the day
flirts with the sun
as the fragrance of salt
licks at my mind

someones daughter
plays in the sand
while i dance with you
in the sand castles
of my heart

feeling like the
queen of dalliance
the committee
of seagulls
welcomes me on the
carpetless pier
as i stroll
arm in arm
with the image
of you..beside me

Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

1 posted 2000-10-10 12:52 PM

This is very nice... You stole my next writing... Thank you for looking at my goose, that's nice. Now I think I'll look at this a little more... see if there's something I can steel. Ha..! Smile

Good work my poet friend

Dale

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2000-10-10 01:05 PM

Quite interesting words to me....LIKED IT!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-10-10 01:15 PM

haa..yes im sure you can find something lucky..glad you liked..fluttering away...

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

4 posted 2000-10-10 01:16 PM

"you in the mirror
of my heart
reflecting my desire"

"with the image
of you..beside me"

Victoria, This piece has hit home with me.
And these lines struck a live wire.
Thank you for sharing this fantastic piece!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-10-10 01:20 PM

thank you justbleu..glad you enjoyed..

appreciate your comments

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-10 01:24 PM

thank you Sheri..nice to know you relate to my poem..thanks for peeking in..

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-08-04 08:59 PM

Victoria, this is one of your best, I really enjoyed the images your words weaved

Melissa~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-18 07:29 PM

very peaceful and calm relaxing setting

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