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Heaven's Touch (a repost cuz somebody made me feel good about it)
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Heaven's Touch (a repost cuz somebody made me feel good about it) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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On there so high above she came Born from a silver streak of flame She tore a trail through my soul Burning passion I cant control Her beauty described in mere words A sweeter song than morning birds Who ever hope and ever try To please her as she passes by When she dips and when she bends Her graceful body never ends And when I look into her eyes I see a fire that never dies Watching her dance toward the ground The greatest entrance makes no sound And then forever my life has worth I've seen where heaven touched the earth i decided i love you all!!! yuh yuh [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-25-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ya know what? You write some excellent serious poetry! Fantastic this was! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Walt, you are one of the few who have ever brought me to tears with a poem. This piece is still touches me now as it did the first time I read it. I thank you for the repost. Michael |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I'm new here and I haven't read this before...I'm so glad you reposted it tho...its a beautiful poem  "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
"Watching her dance toward the ground The greatest entrance makes no sound" Certainly worth the repost. I love the line above. Chris  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Walt! I especially loved the line: 'I've seen where heaven touched the earth' Wow! What a line!! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Watching her dance toward the ground The greatest entrance makes no sound And then forever my life has worth I've seen where heaven touched the earth ----------------------- WOW WOW walt...this is perfection of poetry... I love this passionate and beautiful poem... so glad you reposted it....now it can make all of us "feel good about it"  take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Walt...you know I love this serious side of you. When you write like this, you shine my friend Love ya too by the way, yep we do...yah! |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Sigh... this is wonderful walt. I have seen this sight myself recently, but alas, the angel is always just out of reach.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
W.O.W.~ What thoughts of beauty. Fluttering softly. I like this facet of you very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Walt. . . this is excellent!!! I love this. . . it's so romantic and heartfelt. . . it moves me. . . I think that I'll send this one right back to the top. . . Thanks for the re-post!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is one hell of a poem EXCELLENT is the word  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is really very beautiful and well done, Walt. Bravo!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"... where heaven touched the earth" Pretty awesome stuff, wow...  |
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