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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-03-25 09:43 AM



The Constitution

We live by rules engraved in stone
A constitution of our own
With laws to guide the wayward mind
And words enlightening the blind  

A script of wisdom, love and truth
A preamble we learn in youth
Each article is well defined
And laced with phrases that are kind

The laws to which our hearts adhere
Are conscience’s most fragile ear
And when the melody is heard
The deed speaks louder than the word

The heavy wave of oceans churned
Is wisdom won in lessons learned
And those who follow spirit's script
Can man the helm of any ship

The stone in which the law’s enscrolled
Is just the essence of the soul
And tablet etched within the mind
To which the name of God is signed

The Constitution’s from above
The title of it's simply “LOVE”

Elizabeth Santos



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 03-25-2000).]

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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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1 posted 2000-03-25 09:49 AM


Lovely, my lovely Elizabeth
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-25 10:13 AM


Wise word once more form your pen to our minds  
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
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3 posted 2000-03-25 11:12 AM


This is wonderful, of course...your spirit's pen is magic!

"And those who follow spirit's script
Can man the helm of any ship"
   YES!

Denise
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4 posted 2000-03-25 12:11 PM


Another WOW!! Excellent Elizabeth!! I love the way you turn a phrase!!

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2000-03-25 02:02 PM


Gunslinger,
Your comments touch me

Hoot, Thanks so much

Martie,
You have the magic pen. Mine's a Bic
Thank you

Denise,
Another WOW, Thank you

Liz

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-03-25 07:12 PM


This is wonderful. I think everyone should have this Constitution hanging on their wall!  
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2000-03-26 08:37 AM


Let's bring this wonderful Constitution back around for another tour about, shall we??.. Nice job, Elizabeth..
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