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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Reverie's DesignThere is a place I visit that you and I have shared Alone in muse's calling, I often find you there I find you there in dreamlight in golds and greens, subdued My hands, your face, caressing, Your warmth, my skin's renewed The tender trance of breathing so close, in touch and song Our dreams have come awaking No more, need we prolong You take me to your lap there, your eyes glow candlefire Our blood ignites with touching Pulsing pounds us with desire I face you in my longing, and feel yours climbing high The throbbing point of passion, never more can we deny ~ ~ ~ And in the afterwhispers when greens and golds decline I ache to realize, my love, 'twas reverie's design  Claire |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I suppose there are those who would feel fortunate to have a dream such as this  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, Excellent, beautifully done. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh the things you do with that poetic pen of yours...this is perfection Claire... truly, your words have such a calming peaceful effect on me... take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lost in the land of reverie... without design.. what a concept!!.. Very nice, Claire.. I love this one..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Claire~ This is so lovely. The nicest things happen by dreams 'design'. Your quill is moving across the page with enchanting beauties from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
If I understood the finest compliments of poetry style and expression I would extend them all to you for the wonderful poetry you write. I hope to write like you someday. also, thank you for responding to my poem. Danny A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Claire...you words always strike a chord in my heart....beautiful |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I too wish I could write as beautifully as you do, Claire. I can always feel what you are writing. Absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I liked the recurring gold and greens line in this poem..well actually i liked all of it..but that stood out..brought it full circle for me A lovely poem Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
A beautiful poem, with beautiful lines...... And in the afterwhispers when greens and golds decline I ache to realize, my love, 'twas reverie's design Just lovely.... David2 |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Whew - this one sure sweeps a person away. Wonderful poem, Claire. Michael |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Claire..you take a dream and make it real. This is so touching and so beautifully written. In the afterwhispers....I really love that line. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love the way you write Claire...with such passionate whispers. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Rex...I do feel fortunate to have this dream, but alas, that is all it is...merely phantasy's finding. I thank you, so, for reading. Seymour...thank you, dear poet, for being so nice. Janet Marie...to elicit a peacefulness in one who reads my work brings pleasure to me. Thank you, in earnest, for your response. Nan...thank you, for reading, enjoying, and letting me know. Marge...what I find enchanting are your lovely responses to poetry that moves you. Thank you so much. Danny...no matter, for I do not understand them either. That you read my poem and found it worthy of a response is all the compliment I could wish for. Thank you, sincerely. Ruth...I'm glad. Yours find that same chord in mine. Denise...thank you. That you can feel it makes the writing worthwhile. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Tess...thank you...I find golds and greens to be such inspiring colours. I'm awfully glad you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your kind commentary. David2...your reply was very lovely, as well. Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed this poem. Michael...I don't want to sweep you "too" far away, stay close where I can read your work! Thanks for reading, my friend.WildChild...Thank you, in earnest, for your generous comment. This dream, to me, "is" sometimes real. I guess we all have our share of those, don't we? I'm glad to know you enjoyed this. Martie...and I love the way "you" write. I thank you for reading this and offering such encouraging words today. ~ Claire |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Simply exquisite Doc |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Remarkable, Meadowmuse. Stunning, beautiful imagery, presented in an incredible form. Wonderful work, yet again. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Doc, for your gracious response. ~ Claire |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Krista, thank you! I think our posts must have crossed last night, but I wanted to thank you for reading this, and for your kind response. (and the smile!) ~ Claire |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Claire..While I don't always have a lot of time to reply or to come online for that matter,  I am always so in awe of your talent. This poem is another example. Just beautiful!Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
And what a beautiful design the reverie did weave! This one is wonderful! Thank you for sharing it with us! T |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Truly beautiful work. Very passionate. Your poetry is true art, Claire |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Chris...it is so encouraging knowing that you enjoyed this...thank you Terry...thank "you" for such a lovely response. Isn't this a wonderful place to share? Michael...my friend. Thank you. Your words elevate my spirit. ~ Claire |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Clair, I've been on holiday's too long, but is your poetry getting alot more sensual. wow, cooling fan. Parker |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, Exquisite, as always "your eyes glow candlefire" This is lovely. I can see them. your talent overwhelms Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Somewhat taking from Robert Frost, "No passion in the writer, no passion in the reader." Anyone reading this beautiful expression of thought will have their passion cups overflowing. Beautiful poetry. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, this is beautiful. . . the picture that you have painted here is just like a dream. . . one from which I hope to never awaken. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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