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0 posted 2000-02-06 07:16 PM



( My apologies to anyone not familiar with the song )

It's time to tell my story. It's been held in way too long
About a skinny, gangling kid who sang a haunting song.
I know that it won't be believed…It seems a fantasy
But I just have to write it down, if only just for me.

I was a high-school teacher in a small, mid-western school
Where values still meant something and folks lived the Golden Rule.
The football team was average and the school band played off-key
But there was not another spot on earth I'd rather be.

We held a little talent show in May of '63
Where students sang or danced or showed some small ability.
The afternoon was going well. The students were quite good
And then, upon the small school stage, Tom Merriweather stood.

I must admit I was surprised to see him standing there
In faded Levis, tennis shoes and long, unruly hair.
He had few friends to speak of 'cause he hardly ever spoke.
Kids laughed at him and treated him as if he were a joke.

But there he stood on center stage, the small mic in his hands.
I screamed out (in my Teacher voice) for silence from the stands.
Then he began to sing the strangest song I'd ever heard
And, to this day, my mind recalls the impact of each word.

Has anybody here seen my old friend Abraham?
Can you tell me where he's gone?
He freed a lot of people
But it seems the good die young,
But I just looked around and he's gone.


He went through several stanzas, mentioned other people's names
The audience lost interest and went back to childish games,
But I stood there, transfixed, as if my world had gone awry
By those strange words from that young boy with sadness in his eye.

When the talent show was over and the school gym emptied out
I had to ask young Tommy what that song was all about.
I saw him walking by toward the exit down the hall.
I took the young boy by the arm and stood against the wall.

"Hey, Tommy. That was quite a song", I smiled as best I could.
"I'd like to ask you to explain its meaning, if you would.
Abraham was Lincoln. Of that, I have little doubt
But who were all those other names I heard you sing about?"

The skinny boy looked at me and he said, "John Kennedy -
Killed in Dallas in november, 1963.
Martin Luther King, the next in line to meet his fate,
Killed in Memphis, April 4th of 1968."

"But, Tommy," here I tried to smile, "I mean, how can this be?
In case you hadn't noticed, this is May of '63!
Is this some sort of fantasy, imagination wild,
Or can you tell the future?" Here I winked an eye and smiled.

The small boy raised his eyes. His glance pinned me against the wall.
The hall was full of kids. I barely noticed them at all.
His eyes bore right into my soul.I felt a winter chill,
Reality forsook me as if forced against its will.

He turned around then, walked away and left me rather shook,
My mind still reeling from the path our conversation took.
"You mentioned Bobby!", I called out. "So who was Bobby then?"
But Tommy turned the corner and we never talked again.

A few days later I erased the whole thing from my mind,
Just passed it off as foolishness and left it far behind.
School graduation came and went, the summer quickly passed,
The registration and a brand new school year came at last.

My thoughts were of the weather and Thanksgiving and the lot
When news came on the radio that Kennedy was shot.
The cold chill that shot through me was not due to bleak November,
But from the image in my mind that I could still remember.

Has anybody here seen my old friend John?
Can you tell me where he's gone?
He freed a lot of people,
But it seems the good die young,
But I just looked around and he's gone.


I looked for Tommy everywhere. I checked the Records Hall,
But it was if that skinny lad did not exist at all.
He'd graduated, went his way and could be anyplace.
Although I searched quite thoroughly, I couldn't find a trace.

It had to be coincidence! That young boy could not know
That Kennedy would be shot down - a lucky guess!- although
It made my nerves quite ragged and it filled my mind with doubt
Of how that boy knew things that he could not know things about.

The next four years were quite uneasy - I had marked the date
The young boy spoke of - April 4th of 1968,
Then heard the news on radio in Memphis, Tennessee
That Martin Luther King had been shot on his balcony.

Has anybody here seen my old friend Martin?
Can you tell me where he's gone?
He freed a lot of people,
But it seems the good die young,
But I just looked around and he's gone.


So here I sit, just two months later, June sun overhead,
Teardrops fall on paper from the headlines I just read.
My question has been finally answered, I am sad to say…
Bobby Kennedy shot to death last evening in L.A.

Has anybody here seen my old friend Bobby?
Can you tell me where he's gone?


So that's the story. Now I have the whole thing written down.
I'll send it to a friend of mine I used to know in town.
I've heard he's made a song or two and has a good voice, too
So, Dion, take it if you want and see what you can do.

And, Tommy, don't know where you are or who you were back then,
Nor do I know if I will ever see your likes again,
But, thank you son, for what you shared before you traveled on
And, when you reach your final stop, please say hello to John.

I thought I saw him walkin'
Up over the hill
With Abraham, Martin and John.






[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-06-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-02-06 07:27 PM


Balladeer, you are so amazing. This gave me chills. I am not familiar with the song,but this still had quite an impact on me. I'm so glad you shared this. -SEA
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2 posted 2000-02-06 07:29 PM


Michael-
Tears flowing as I join you in song.
What a most wonderful story you've told here.
No room for laughter ... just admiring awe.

What a loving, feeling piece you've written.
Thank you, Michael, for your 'vision'.
I love you for your tenderness
and your talent.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-02-06 07:32 PM


I am stunned by the brilliance of this! Can't think of one thing to say except this is one of your best...and to say that..well, it's amazing...........
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4 posted 2000-02-06 08:09 PM


Tears filled my eyes as I read this, the hair on my arms is raised. You sent chills up my spine . This is excellent, you really have a way with words

 

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5 posted 2000-02-06 08:32 PM


You gave me chills too my friend.  I love this visionary way the whole peice was written.  I almost want to ask was this guy real?  Perfect my friend..  
*smooch*  I too love your tender heart and soul  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
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6 posted 2000-02-06 09:06 PM


Sea...Thank you. Check the song out when you get a chance. You'll like it.

Marge...Your words mean so much to me. It's not possible to thank you enough....but I'll keep trying  

DeVine one...words like that from you are rewarding enough to make it all worthwhile. Thank you.

catwomen...I've always wanted to have that effect on someone! Thank you for letting my poetry do it  

Isis....you always know the right thing to say. Thank you, sweetheart.

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7 posted 2000-02-06 09:07 PM


This is sooooo exceptional, my Deer....
You make me proud to call you my friend...
Those were some pretty intense years, and you've captured them perfectly...
Awesome - simply awesome!


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8 posted 2000-02-06 09:17 PM


For once this Dutchie can't find the words to express herself in English, so I'll keep it simple....a great poem Balladeer !
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9 posted 2000-02-06 09:19 PM


This is ...(it's really hard to find
the right words to describe this piece
'Deer)....writing at its best..
The emotions your poem evokes are
strong; and I agree with the chills and raising of hair....
Wonderful!!!!
I applaud you Sir...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon






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10 posted 2000-02-06 09:20 PM


balladeer: this is enchanting... i always look forward to reading your stories... they're all so very captivating  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

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As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge


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11 posted 2000-02-06 09:50 PM


Wow!!!  This left me with no words (that's a good thing)
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12 posted 2000-02-06 09:54 PM


Nan....that pride in friendship goes both ways. Thank you.

Munda...sometimes no words can say a lot. I thank you very much.  

Pepper..just knowing you is a hair-raising event!!! Thanks for such wonderful praise       

poetry_kills...when I can captivate a boy with no brain, I must be doing something right     Thanks! I really appreciate your words.

Martie...yes it is.....and I thank you for it.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-06-2000).]

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13 posted 2000-02-06 09:56 PM


My hair is standing up...

That was an incredible story!  Not to mention incredible style..Wow!


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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14 posted 2000-02-06 09:57 PM


Mr. Balladeer,
I read this poem, and quickly wrote The Day of the Senator. I had forgotten all about this, and your poem reminded me of those times.Wonderful, wonderful poem you wrote
Liz

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15 posted 2000-02-06 10:06 PM


Brilliance dear Balladeer!  

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Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

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16 posted 2000-02-06 10:27 PM


Balladeer,
I know your abilities so all I can say is Bravo once again.

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17 posted 2000-02-07 12:02 PM


Your words have the power to take me right into the story. What a talent you have. Excellent piece, Balladeer.

Denise

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18 posted 2000-02-07 12:06 PM


How could my admiration for you possibly grow any stronger?  It's a brilliant song...and an equally (if not more so) poem.  This style is my favorite of yours.  'Tis why I call you "Master Storyteller."
Love ya, Sally

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19 posted 2000-02-07 01:16 AM


This was far more than great Micheal...it was emotional and very stirring....I never know if I'm going to laugh or cry when I read your poems...but this one definantly touched my heart!!!!!

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20 posted 2000-02-07 06:19 AM


I'm very familiar with the song, although I wasn't alive when the events transpired.  And I must echo the others in the chills this reading brought me.  Balladeer..all I can really say, inadequate as it may be, is WOW!

Alicat, the awed Persnikitty

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 02-07-2000).]

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21 posted 2000-02-07 07:33 AM


The song always makes me cry... so I knew I was in trouble when I read the title of this poem. *G* Dammit, Balladeer... you need to post a kleenex/hanky scale with some of your poems... this is at least a 3 hanky one. *S*

If such foresight existed
And events had been altered
Would we still remember and wish?
Or would they have faltered
To a disappointing
Footnote of history
Without the "could have beens"
That are our memories?

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 02-07-2000).]

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22 posted 2000-02-07 08:43 AM


An amazing story Balladeer
Hard to believe but yet your words so clear
Excuse my fast reply, I am at work right know
But know that I have read the poem
and my lips still hanging on to WOW
I have to go, you know I hate to go
I'm so glad I met a man like you

Ps It's realy special what you have done there and I hope that this will be a song.

Sorry gotta run

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23 posted 2000-02-07 10:38 AM


Balladeer....wow, the time and effort you spent on this one is very evident. Wonderfully done my friend  
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24 posted 2000-02-07 10:47 AM


Looks im kinda late to this thread, but I have to say, wonderful work Balladeer. Although I never lived through this period of history, this poem was chilling and gave me goosebumps   -Travis

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

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25 posted 2000-02-07 11:46 AM


really well written, your ability to make the reader "live" this through reading alone!
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26 posted 2000-02-07 12:04 PM


Mike - this is a fine effort - you must have spent a lot of time putting this together so well.  I truly enjoyed every line.  You are all aces, my friend.  This is a wonderful poem.
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27 posted 2000-02-07 01:31 PM


What a remarkable way to invite everyone in to the "other world" of knowledge...and to not doubt what someone might say...all the way.  Too many people are "blessed" with more than the average person can know...thank you for bringing this to the forefront.

 Sunshine
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28 posted 2000-02-07 03:21 PM


Your words are music to my heart. I thank you all VERY much. You make any effort worthwhile.
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29 posted 2000-02-07 07:03 PM


WoW 'Deer what a heck of a job you did with this!  Its GREAT!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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30 posted 2000-02-26 07:25 PM


Sir Balladeer, This is fabulous, where was I when you created this masterpiece just glad I found it, cause I really love it. You really are amazing with your talent.
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31 posted 2000-02-26 08:01 PM


I have heard this song hundreds of time`s if not more and never have I known the true meaning of it,Till now.
You have givin an great song new meaning to me.
Thank you Balladeer.
Very nice read.


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32 posted 2000-02-26 10:51 PM


Outstanding, Balladeer.
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33 posted 2000-02-27 12:11 PM


This is outstanding. I'm familiar with that song. It always will cause a stirring in me much the way this poem did. Makes me stop and think about the what ifs and if we would have come as far as we have if things had turned out differently.

Thank you!

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34 posted 2000-02-27 12:24 PM


Balladeer, how in the heck did I miss this the first time around???

Chills down my spine, what a great poem and haunting story!

Corinne

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Searched the forums, and what a find this was!

Elizabeth

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36 posted 2000-03-14 05:39 PM


MM!  Don't know how I missed this one, but, it was worth waiting for!  I love you, man!
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37 posted 2000-03-14 06:08 PM


A "TEN" on my score card!
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38 posted 2000-03-14 07:11 PM


Dear Balladeer,

This is a remarkable poem.  It touched me deeply.  Wonderfully written.


Poeminister.

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39 posted 2000-03-14 07:34 PM


very powerful my friend
i hope you write more of them
i think this poem was extremely well written, very touching, yet somehow..... oh well i dont know how exactly to put it so ill just say it was Very Very Good
                                    Larry

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40 posted 2002-03-12 12:13 PM


Balladeer,

   I remember reading this before, as a repost in a later forum. It still gives me chills. Your writing is amazing.

Hugs,
Tara

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