Open Poetry #6 |
Abraham, Martin & John |
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( My apologies to anyone not familiar with the song ) It's time to tell my story. It's been held in way too long About a skinny, gangling kid who sang a haunting song. I know that it won't be believed…It seems a fantasy But I just have to write it down, if only just for me. I was a high-school teacher in a small, mid-western school Where values still meant something and folks lived the Golden Rule. The football team was average and the school band played off-key But there was not another spot on earth I'd rather be. We held a little talent show in May of '63 Where students sang or danced or showed some small ability. The afternoon was going well. The students were quite good And then, upon the small school stage, Tom Merriweather stood. I must admit I was surprised to see him standing there In faded Levis, tennis shoes and long, unruly hair. He had few friends to speak of 'cause he hardly ever spoke. Kids laughed at him and treated him as if he were a joke. But there he stood on center stage, the small mic in his hands. I screamed out (in my Teacher voice) for silence from the stands. Then he began to sing the strangest song I'd ever heard And, to this day, my mind recalls the impact of each word. Has anybody here seen my old friend Abraham? Can you tell me where he's gone? He freed a lot of people But it seems the good die young, But I just looked around and he's gone. He went through several stanzas, mentioned other people's names The audience lost interest and went back to childish games, But I stood there, transfixed, as if my world had gone awry By those strange words from that young boy with sadness in his eye. When the talent show was over and the school gym emptied out I had to ask young Tommy what that song was all about. I saw him walking by toward the exit down the hall. I took the young boy by the arm and stood against the wall. "Hey, Tommy. That was quite a song", I smiled as best I could. "I'd like to ask you to explain its meaning, if you would. Abraham was Lincoln. Of that, I have little doubt But who were all those other names I heard you sing about?" The skinny boy looked at me and he said, "John Kennedy - Killed in Dallas in november, 1963. Martin Luther King, the next in line to meet his fate, Killed in Memphis, April 4th of 1968." "But, Tommy," here I tried to smile, "I mean, how can this be? In case you hadn't noticed, this is May of '63! Is this some sort of fantasy, imagination wild, Or can you tell the future?" Here I winked an eye and smiled. The small boy raised his eyes. His glance pinned me against the wall. The hall was full of kids. I barely noticed them at all. His eyes bore right into my soul.I felt a winter chill, Reality forsook me as if forced against its will. He turned around then, walked away and left me rather shook, My mind still reeling from the path our conversation took. "You mentioned Bobby!", I called out. "So who was Bobby then?" But Tommy turned the corner and we never talked again. A few days later I erased the whole thing from my mind, Just passed it off as foolishness and left it far behind. School graduation came and went, the summer quickly passed, The registration and a brand new school year came at last. My thoughts were of the weather and Thanksgiving and the lot When news came on the radio that Kennedy was shot. The cold chill that shot through me was not due to bleak November, But from the image in my mind that I could still remember. Has anybody here seen my old friend John? Can you tell me where he's gone? He freed a lot of people, But it seems the good die young, But I just looked around and he's gone. I looked for Tommy everywhere. I checked the Records Hall, But it was if that skinny lad did not exist at all. He'd graduated, went his way and could be anyplace. Although I searched quite thoroughly, I couldn't find a trace. It had to be coincidence! That young boy could not know That Kennedy would be shot down - a lucky guess!- although It made my nerves quite ragged and it filled my mind with doubt Of how that boy knew things that he could not know things about. The next four years were quite uneasy - I had marked the date The young boy spoke of - April 4th of 1968, Then heard the news on radio in Memphis, Tennessee That Martin Luther King had been shot on his balcony. Has anybody here seen my old friend Martin? Can you tell me where he's gone? He freed a lot of people, But it seems the good die young, But I just looked around and he's gone. So here I sit, just two months later, June sun overhead, Teardrops fall on paper from the headlines I just read. My question has been finally answered, I am sad to say… Bobby Kennedy shot to death last evening in L.A. Has anybody here seen my old friend Bobby? Can you tell me where he's gone? So that's the story. Now I have the whole thing written down. I'll send it to a friend of mine I used to know in town. I've heard he's made a song or two and has a good voice, too So, Dion, take it if you want and see what you can do. And, Tommy, don't know where you are or who you were back then, Nor do I know if I will ever see your likes again, But, thank you son, for what you shared before you traveled on And, when you reach your final stop, please say hello to John. I thought I saw him walkin' Up over the hill With Abraham, Martin and John. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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SEA
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Balladeer, you are so amazing. This gave me chills. I am not familiar with the song,but this still had quite an impact on me. I'm so glad you shared this. -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
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Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael- Tears flowing as I join you in song. What a most wonderful story you've told here. No room for laughter ... just admiring awe. What a loving, feeling piece you've written. Thank you, Michael, for your 'vision'. I love you for your tenderness and your talent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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I am stunned by the brilliance of this! Can't think of one thing to say except this is one of your best...and to say that..well, it's amazing........... |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
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Tears filled my eyes as I read this, the hair on my arms is raised. You sent chills up my spine . This is excellent, you really have a way with words |
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Isis Member Ascendant
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You gave me chills too my friend. I love this visionary way the whole peice was written. I almost want to ask was this guy real? Perfect my friend.. *smooch* I too love your tender heart and soul Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sea...Thank you. Check the song out when you get a chance. You'll like it. Marge...Your words mean so much to me. It's not possible to thank you enough....but I'll keep trying DeVine one...words like that from you are rewarding enough to make it all worthwhile. Thank you. catwomen...I've always wanted to have that effect on someone! Thank you for letting my poetry do it Isis....you always know the right thing to say. Thank you, sweetheart. |
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Nan
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This is sooooo exceptional, my Deer.... You make me proud to call you my friend... Those were some pretty intense years, and you've captured them perfectly... Awesome - simply awesome! |
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Munda Member Elite
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Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
For once this Dutchie can't find the words to express herself in English, so I'll keep it simple....a great poem Balladeer ! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is ...(it's really hard to find the right words to describe this piece 'Deer)....writing at its best.. The emotions your poem evokes are strong; and I agree with the chills and raising of hair.... Wonderful!!!! I applaud you Sir... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
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Posts 549new orleans |
balladeer: this is enchanting... i always look forward to reading your stories... they're all so very captivating sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Martie
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Wow!!! This left me with no words (that's a good thing) |
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Balladeer
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Nan....that pride in friendship goes both ways. Thank you. Munda...sometimes no words can say a lot. I thank you very much. Pepper..just knowing you is a hair-raising event!!! Thanks for such wonderful praise poetry_kills...when I can captivate a boy with no brain, I must be doing something right Thanks! I really appreciate your words. Martie...yes it is.....and I thank you for it. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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Breathe~ Member
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My hair is standing up... That was an incredible story! Not to mention incredible style..Wow! Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
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Mr. Balladeer, I read this poem, and quickly wrote The Day of the Senator. I had forgotten all about this, and your poem reminded me of those times.Wonderful, wonderful poem you wrote Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Brilliance dear Balladeer! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
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Balladeer, I know your abilities so all I can say is Bravo once again. |
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Denise
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Your words have the power to take me right into the story. What a talent you have. Excellent piece, Balladeer. Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
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How could my admiration for you possibly grow any stronger? It's a brilliant song...and an equally (if not more so) poem. This style is my favorite of yours. 'Tis why I call you "Master Storyteller." Love ya, Sally |
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devina Member Elite
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Posts 3539Cali |
This was far more than great Micheal...it was emotional and very stirring....I never know if I'm going to laugh or cry when I read your poems...but this one definantly touched my heart!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alicat Member Elite
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Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I'm very familiar with the song, although I wasn't alive when the events transpired. And I must echo the others in the chills this reading brought me. Balladeer..all I can really say, inadequate as it may be, is WOW! Alicat, the awed Persnikitty [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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suthern
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Posts 20723Louisiana |
The song always makes me cry... so I knew I was in trouble when I read the title of this poem. *G* Dammit, Balladeer... you need to post a kleenex/hanky scale with some of your poems... this is at least a 3 hanky one. *S* If such foresight existed And events had been altered Would we still remember and wish? Or would they have faltered To a disappointing Footnote of history Without the "could have beens" That are our memories? [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
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An amazing story Balladeer Hard to believe but yet your words so clear Excuse my fast reply, I am at work right know But know that I have read the poem and my lips still hanging on to WOW I have to go, you know I hate to go I'm so glad I met a man like you Ps It's realy special what you have done there and I hope that this will be a song. Sorry gotta run The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
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Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Balladeer....wow, the time and effort you spent on this one is very evident. Wonderfully done my friend |
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Mistikman Senior Member
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Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Looks im kinda late to this thread, but I have to say, wonderful work Balladeer. Although I never lived through this period of history, this poem was chilling and gave me goosebumps -Travis I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Corazon Senior Member
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really well written, your ability to make the reader "live" this through reading alone! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
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Mike - this is a fine effort - you must have spent a lot of time putting this together so well. I truly enjoyed every line. You are all aces, my friend. This is a wonderful poem. |
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Sunshine
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What a remarkable way to invite everyone in to the "other world" of knowledge...and to not doubt what someone might say...all the way. Too many people are "blessed" with more than the average person can know...thank you for bringing this to the forefront. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Balladeer
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Your words are music to my heart. I thank you all VERY much. You make any effort worthwhile. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
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WoW 'Deer what a heck of a job you did with this! Its GREAT! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sir Balladeer, This is fabulous, where was I when you created this masterpiece just glad I found it, cause I really love it. You really are amazing with your talent. |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
I have heard this song hundreds of time`s if not more and never have I known the true meaning of it,Till now. You have givin an great song new meaning to me. Thank you Balladeer. Very nice read. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
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Outstanding, Balladeer. |
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Shelley Member
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This is outstanding. I'm familiar with that song. It always will cause a stirring in me much the way this poem did. Makes me stop and think about the what ifs and if we would have come as far as we have if things had turned out differently. Thank you! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
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Posts 5167state of confusion |
Balladeer, how in the heck did I miss this the first time around??? Chills down my spine, what a great poem and haunting story! Corinne |
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Elizabeth
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Searched the forums, and what a find this was! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Deb Lynne Member
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Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
MM! Don't know how I missed this one, but, it was worth waiting for! I love you, man! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
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Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A "TEN" on my score card! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dear Balladeer, This is a remarkable poem. It touched me deeply. Wonderfully written. Poeminister. |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
very powerful my friend i hope you write more of them i think this poem was extremely well written, very touching, yet somehow..... oh well i dont know how exactly to put it so ill just say it was Very Very Good Larry |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer, I remember reading this before, as a repost in a later forum. It still gives me chills. Your writing is amazing. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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