Critical Analysis #2 |
Observation |
Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Observation While riding on a train, near speed of light This paradox at once became apparent: A flash of light beside my rails of flight (While riding on a train near speed of light) Spread either way as quickly as it might, As if the speed of light were law inherent. While riding on a train, near speed of light This paradox at once became apparent. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
o the travel too the beyond and back again. I don't know if thats what it means to you. but thats what i got out of it. very well put together and the title fits all too well. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
Haha, that was cleverly structured. Reminded me of Donnie Darko. |
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cynicsRus Senior Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 591So Cal So Cool! |
Another good Triolet, Pete. Einstein again--as you had earlier inferred. Do you have one on Cosmology? Sid |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for recognizing it Sid. Yes, this is a pretty close paraphrase of his own words from his book "Relativity: The Special and General Theory" in which he describes the need for and the logic behind the theory in terms aimed at the common reader with a just high school education. And thank you for asking. As a matter of fact, I do have one on cosmology. I'll post it shortly. Pete |
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