Open Poetry #46 |
On a Can of Coke |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
On a Can of Coke Just 140 calories per can If everything was 140 Without being fatty,and too hard on my teeth. I am sure that I would take a bite out of it. Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ha. Truth. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Isn't that the truth! I cut out all white, sugar, fructose...you know all they say is bad for you, and replaced it all with healthy stuff. However, offer me a chocolate, or ice cream, and I am like a herd of elephants to get that thing! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is one gem of a poem. It should of had a bigger audience. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so original and thoughtful. Have a nice day yann |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Would that everything came with a label you could trust. I like the thought behind this one. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, Don’t do it. The aluminum will cause indigestion. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Juju - this one deserves another go. I would also, if only 140... BC |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Try a can of Toerag! No calories, very sweet, not an ounce of fat. Very satisfying and refreshing. So easy on your teeth. Very interesting write young lady. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Well, since WalMart has the cases on sale now for $5 I tend to drink a case a week! That's a pound of calories just in drinks! Gotta stop this soon good write! |
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