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Open Poetry #46

Kiss In The Wind

Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-05-14 09:35 AM

Birds fly.
Eagles soar.
For your love my heart roars.

A baby is born.
New life begins.
Love was born from a kiss in the wind.

I loved you in the beginning.
I'll love you til the end.
Our love began.
With a sweet kiss in the wind.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-14 09:46 AM

Lovely Lamar! I like the way the poem itself kind of blows in like the wind.

ebm

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

2 posted 2010-05-14 12:05 PM

Very nice...the imagery flows and the emotion is very clear...lovely poem..well done Lamar.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-05-14 05:40 PM

The wind is soulful in your very lovely words, dear Lamar.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2010-05-14 07:35 PM

this reminded me of the scene from the Quiet Man...as the wind was blowing, he pulled her back into him and ravaged her with they're first kiss...

enjoyed...

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-05-15 08:20 AM

The last stanza finishes this poem off well.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2010-05-15 06:22 PM

I love the wind and think it sometimes kisses me. Your sweet poem of love reminded me.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 2010-05-15 07:52 PM

I like this one. Like the feel. Like the message.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2010-05-17 06:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2010-05-18 10:08 PM

Lamar - a sweet kiss found on the wind, how loving...

BC

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2010-05-19 04:26 AM

hello lamar, this is very inspiring and totally delicious, your poem is etheral and wonderful.

regards

yann

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