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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 you should have held me. I waded out too deep… didn’t see, you… didn’t see and now it’s too late I am carried away in foreign currents and treading isn’t the custom here… you know deep waters scare me and that I prefer the beach. ~SEA~ *thank you Paul, for inspiring... /pip/Forum110/HTML/001074.html |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I don't think that I've ever inspired anyone before. Neato burrito. Great write.  Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Me too, me too! Love this little beach scene, SEA gal! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely inspiration Susan~~ M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely write, enjoyed it and its sentiments so sweetly expressed. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely, in perfect alignment to Paul's inspiring poem. Love, Margherita |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
SEA, What a beautiful picture/poem compilation, Subtle and sweet thoughts, and a nice continuing of the inspriation poem. Gotta love the beach, Tracey. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Hell, if others get bumped, this deserves a "bump" for sure SEA. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Most beautiful. I am happy it came back up for me to read. xoxoxo A |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea, loved this write my friend, I felt the moment and the thoughts, enjoyed, thank you. Rick |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Pure loveliness contained in a delicately and tenderly written poem, I especially adored the following: I am carried away in foreign currents and treading isn’t the custom here… Heart2Heart |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
My fave too, Heart... Aren't you just lovely here! Adored, Heather |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep the beach is sometimes safer. Love ya miss ya! Enjoyed"...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR POETRY!!!! ~ BEAUTIFUL!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is some great writing sea i really like it shel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Go figure now the ... is there instead of what I saw  Well, it is just a beautiful poem any way you look at it Sea. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it when poets inspire other poets and they come up with things like this! Bravo, to you and to Paul for gifting us these two fine beauties. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Susan you have written a very touching poem here my dear, most enjoyable, love Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! I just realized that when I followed your link to Paul's poem, I neglected to reply to yours! I suppose one could say that this poem is about SEA drifting out to sea... May you always find your way back to a sandy shore.  Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - a most enchanting write, by an enchanting poetress... BC |
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