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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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lay palms before my feet sweet Judas prophesy that I am only even as you anoint these lips cataracts fall from searchless windows illuminate I am not H |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Powerful, yet subtle! I suppose that's an oxymoron. But it's how I perceive this brilliant piece of writing! "cataracts fall from searchless windows" ~ Dang, yer good! Love 'n hugs, Linda   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nor am I ... This intrigues me tremendously. "Sweet Judas" ... he loved too much and couldn't see or know of the greater design, he was actually the one who loved Him most ... that's why I love your combination of "sweet" with "Judas" who in the eyes of the majority just means "betrayer". Might be used in a metaphorical way, but being a passionate defensor of this unhappy disciple, I just needed to say what's on my mind. "cataracts fall from searchless windows" ... powerful imagery. I am captivated by your mind. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP..this is a cool on, enjoyed it |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
illuminate I am not This is so deep it begs for explanation. lol |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
powerful pretty lady. let your "little light shine." ;-) love, me |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Linda Love them hugs angelbaby..TY Margherita You have a lovely mind...spill on me all day long. Thank you for sharing. D Thanks for the breeze by...lovish Jer Bear Lucy, lemme 'splain... Marandadoll last time I let my little light shine, momma told me to put my bloomers back on... 8 x Love, Heather |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ahem, You are breathtaking. Yours, Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
girly... you mop the floor... love, shel |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Paul Mine? Truly? Let me break out my polishing cloth before I put ya on my mantel...no wait...like ya just the way you are. TY : ) Shel Thank you so much sweetness...you know I sing when I mop...of course I use it for a microphone *blushes* Thanks heaps Love, Heather |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Gotta agree with Paul. You kinda sucked the breath out of me. A |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thank you so much dear Alison. I appreciate you reading me. L, H |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Not TRULY, as you're wearing a weddin' rang in your picture, I see.... But mostly. You can polish me and put me anywhere you like! :O :O :O That was a joke. I mean, come on. I was set up for that one.  I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
ROFLMAO X-D Yes mah deah, that certainly is my wedding rang, and a happy one at that...but I would still like you above my fireplace. I have started this collection you see, of viking poets' that wear their hearts on their sleeves.. : ) H pssst...(did vikings have sleeves..?) |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ummm... This is just between you and I, but I'm actually not a viking. I'm mostly just a guy. I have a beard though. Maybe that counts? I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Well duh. Have you ever actually seen a viking in a Gillette commercial? I think not. H |
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