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Love's Song (Tanka Challenge - Love)
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Love's Song (Tanka Challenge - Love) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Flowers dressed in green Frost patterns on frozen glass Cherry blossom buds Swaying to robin’s love song Don't you just love spring mornings? Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (05-02-2007 11:24 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed all the spring imagery! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! I especially liked the 'interplay' of the following images: "Frost patterns on frozen glass Cherry blossom buds Swaying to robin’s spring song" ...and thank you for taking up the 'Love tanka challenge'! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you both -- hugs and a good morning -- I had to change it. Couldn't help it. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful~~  M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
M Thank you I value every comment you leave. A |
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