Stolen Kiss (Love Tanka Challenge)

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Open Poetry #40

Stolen Kiss (Love Tanka Challenge)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2007-04-23 09:47 PM

Stolen Kiss

Love’s first stolen kiss
Tastes like a waterfall mist,
Refreshingly sweet!
Serendipitous moment,
Resplendent sanctuary!

Bruce, ~tanka-you~ for the challenge!

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

1 posted 2007-04-23 10:24 PM

Midnitesun,

This is very fine. You nailed it.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-04-24 09:40 AM

I really liked this one!

MUCH applause!

and ~tanka-you very much~ in return,
for taking up the 'love tanka' challenge!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-04-24 09:53 AM

Kacy~
Perfect form ... lovely feelings~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2007-04-24 08:29 PM

I could taste the sweetness of love in this one...Beautiful writing...*Big Hugs

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-24 08:32 PM

a true beauty.
enjoyed.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-04-25 12:14 PM

yes!
beautiful...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2007-04-25 09:48 AM

thanks everyone! There are so many ways to write about LOVE, and I am hoping more pipsters will 'submit' to this challenge!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-04-25 02:31 PM

and challenge well met...beautiful imagry...

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2007-04-25 05:40 PM

I came back to read this again....
very fine!

much more applause!!

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

10 posted 2007-04-25 05:40 PM

Beautiful. I always love reading your lovely words ...

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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