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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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 Once apon a time.... She locked in her tower Away from it all Left to do the dirty work Washing windows in the grand hall Her dad is dead Step mother took his place Step daughters moved in Both with an evil grin on their face One night a year The Ball is held The prince is there Waiting in haste For she needs to be the fair The sun has set Alone in her room Tears stream down her face All of a sudden a little light bloom With a "Boom!" and "Clash!" A figure stands in the smoke "Here i am!" There she stood drenched and soaked "Who are you?" Poor Cindy cried "Why i am the one who gives you a wish" She said and sighed. "So what will it be my dear?" She said while ringing out her dress. "I want to go to the ball" "I should of know you'd want that more than less" With a wave of her wand A dress appeared. White as snow. She stood there in shock, slightly in fear. "Will that be all my dear?" She said with haste. "No Mam' I have no ride to go" "Well." She said. "We have no time to waste!" Another flick of her wand the pumpkin grew. Mice changed into horses The carage was drewn. The Prince greeting guest Ladies most of them all "Where is she?" He thought. "The invitations were sent out for the ball" The wind was wirling. Cindy was on her way She had to kiss the prince Before the light of day. There at the Ball The ochestra played The Prince in his throne. "Will she come?" He wondered that all day. His princess had came. She lit the room. As soon as she was noticed. The ladies loomed The dance has begun He stepped forword Dainty she be. No spoken words They danced the night away. Intill sun rise came She look towards the horizen She ran from the Ball , all the same The magic worn off The deed was done All because the sun had to rise Cindy was done with her fun. Weeks passed No messege sent Cindy's heart was slowly to break But it didn't, its only bent A knock at the door Step sisters flew For they all knew... But what was the prince doing here with only a glass shoe? He asked them to try on the shoe All of them fail But little did he know there was someone else there. Cindy be the one who did prevail. They were to be wedd For though her heart was slowly to bend. From the days not spoken Slowly she knew it was to mend Off into the sunset. Her heart a mend Finish this story So they lived a happily ever after end The End... --------------------------------------------- Yeah i know the typical Fairytale. lol Also i think this is the longest poem i ever wrote *Phew!* And man am i tired! lol ~Zach~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
awe, the whole time i was reading it I kept on picturing scences from Cinderella. I love the little mice, there so cute! anyway. great poem. {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] {`~Emily~`} |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
This was very good! Awesome write. And even if it was just the typical fairy tale, I still loved it and tottaly can relate! *-crazycece-* |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I liked the poem for the most part, there were a few little areas that seemed a bit bumpy when reading but overall it was good and I always enjoy a good fairytale |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
oppssyyy! I am so sorry to just stumble upon this poem that you did for my challenge!  ~Good thing I was looking at the poetry Challenge forum! Great write  ARCTIC WIND |
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