Teen Poetry #8 |
Love Has Forsaken Me... |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Is it too much to ask? Do you want me to get on my knee's and plead? Has romance left me forsaken.. Left my heart broken and let it bleed.. Have I fallen too many times? Left here, left here to lie Am I just like a broken toy? Played with too many times Forgotten by all No hope for me in this romance Was there any hope? Did I ever stand a chance? Is it too much to ask for.. one more shot? I'll really try this time. I'll give it all I got!! Please don't forget me I know this sounds desperate Too bad it had to come to this I don't want my heart to become a locket I want to share my love With my one and only But there's no hope for me I guess.. I guess I'll be forever lonely.. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
No you wont!! -emily tries to quickly think of an idea but fails 'cause her brain doesn't work that fast- lol you wont be alone forever, i promise. Great poem, ttyl {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thanks Em'! haha.. and don't hurt yourself thinking too fast now hun.. lol.. Thanks for reading! I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Good poem!!! Your young so you have plenty of time to find your one and only. You won't always be or feel alone. "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
zach lonely? what!? i thought we were lovers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hate you!!!!! *sniff* hahah....... just kidding....but come on man.....i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmfao |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Omgsh! lmfao! Sorry Keagan you were ONCE my lover but you and Carissa had something special..I couldn't intervene lol.. Idk about you but I'm soooo over you! lol jk! you'll always be my pretend lover.. lol Love ya dude!! hahah! once again.. jk.. haha -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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