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Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

0 posted 2006-10-08 10:07 PM

Dear Lady,

Yesterday
when the sun glared down
I stood within the square
centered
colors unnatural
gleamed off gold buildings
while church bells sang to soothe the crazed
arms outstretched I hummed
while pigeons conversed
we sat together and spoke of you
and they flew in perfect sequence
I dream tonight of San Marco
and your dainty hands
holding kernels
you were young
wild
unaware of the memories
that would carve deep into the cobblestone
while with frightened ease, you too
laughed with the pigeons

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-10-08 10:36 PM

Ah...

And the poems bloom
under the kiss
of poetry.

Well done, Dominique!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2006-10-08 10:57 PM

thanks, Sunhine..

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-10-09 03:21 PM

"we sat together and spoke of you
and they flew in perfect sequence
I dream tonight of San Marco
and your dainty hands
holding kernels
you were young
wild"

Page
this sings so well
we should all feed the pigeons
for the first time
when we are young
I was a little envious
but I love the picture of you
with that goofy Venetian bird

one of your best Monklet!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2006-10-09 03:28 PM

Page, this is outstanding. Lovely writing!!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

5 posted 2006-10-09 04:57 PM

Thank you both for your words of inspiration.

amberhues
Member

since 2006-11-01

Posts 93

6 posted 2006-11-01 06:54 PM

WOW! I loved this.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-11-02 08:47 AM

Thanks, this poem is very speacial to me.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2006-11-02 09:21 AM

Beautiful work!
I loved it.
More, please

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2006-11-02 09:41 AM

Your words spoke directly to my spirit! A glorious write! ~ Filled with vivid images and stirring sentiments!

Grace-full penning!

Loving Light,

Earth Angel

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

10 posted 2006-11-02 10:50 AM

Thank you both... I am thrilled you enjoyed it so much!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2006-11-02 05:44 PM

ms Dom, a pleasure to watch you dance

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

12 posted 2006-11-02 05:57 PM

Thank you kindly Dark, glad to perform!

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

13 posted 2007-05-29 07:49 AM

Beautiful imagery with such a graceful flow. Thank you for sharing the vision.

MoonShadow
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