Open Poetry #39 |
sunrise poets |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Lady of the Lakes! [for: Kathy] Would that I, like she...could live in days of ‘perpetual morning’... beyond my nighttime’s dejavu of fallen rainbows... Colors melting on the ground flash-frozen in a sunset’s instant by the wicked Winter wind! She paints in words so warm and wild... wise and ‘fancy-free’... as any Summer breeze with the loveliest touch of dawn inside and I hear the purest news that she and Nature speaks in gentlest majesty... 'till I am calmed and quiet and quite content... as the mellowed Autumn mist! |
||
© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, Enjoyed the read. |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful indeed.. but then, I enjoy every word you write. Hugs dear poet. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is nothing second handed about your writing, dear poet! To read your poetry is always a feast for my senses. This poem is lovely beyond all my words! May autumn's mist kiss you softly. EA |
||
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you all so much!....this particular poem is one (of two) that are absolutely the 'most important' to me! [the 'inspirations' know why!] |
||
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
would that you lived not with fallen rainbows colors melting on the ground Bruce this poem is absolutely exquisite |
||
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think you have done well |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The inspiration has certainly planted a seed that will bear fruit one day.... You will enjoy the fruits of your labors, for they will precede you and remain for some time. |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
FANTABULOUS! |
||
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a beautiful write, a soft embrace done in the vespers of dawn. A treasure for sure. |
||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and romantic. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |