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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-11-13 12:40 PM


         Lady of the Lakes!
           [for: Kathy]

Would that I, like she...could live
in days of ‘perpetual morning’...
beyond my nighttime’s dejavu
of fallen rainbows...
Colors melting on the ground
flash-frozen in a sunset’s instant
by the wicked Winter wind!

She paints in words so warm and wild...
wise and ‘fancy-free’...
as any Summer breeze
with the loveliest touch of dawn inside
and I hear the purest news
that she and Nature speaks
in gentlest majesty...
'till I am calmed and quiet
and quite content...
as the mellowed Autumn mist!



© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-11-13 07:43 AM


secondhanddreampoet,
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-11-13 08:50 AM


Beautiful indeed..
but then, I enjoy every word you write.
Hugs dear poet.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-11-13 09:20 AM


There is nothing second handed about your writing, dear poet! To read your poetry is always a feast for my senses.

This poem is lovely beyond all my words!

May autumn's mist kiss you softly.


EA

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2006-11-13 10:30 AM


thank you all so much!....this particular poem is one (of two) that are absolutely
the 'most important' to me! [the 'inspirations' know why!]

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-11-13 04:24 PM




would that you lived not with
fallen rainbows
colors melting on the ground
Bruce

this poem is absolutely exquisite


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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-11-13 04:46 PM


I think you have done well

Magnus
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7 posted 2006-11-13 05:41 PM


The inspiration has certainly planted a
seed that will bear fruit one day....

You will enjoy the fruits of your
labors, for they will precede you
and remain for some time.

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Gaia
8 posted 2006-11-13 07:47 PM


FANTABULOUS!
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2006-11-13 07:50 PM


Such a beautiful write, a soft embrace done in the vespers of dawn.
A treasure for sure.

Drauntz
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10 posted 2007-05-17 07:26 PM


beautiful and romantic.
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