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plaza san marco |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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you took your heart to venice with my blessing I wanted you to go really... I said tell the pigeons in plaza san marco hello for me hold your arms wide my love let them eat from your hands and shoulders you sent a picture pigeon on your shoulder both of you looking into the camera I don’t recognize the bird and did you have to smile so damn wide? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
incredible thats your poetry, incredible |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Helen! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I've been there and they will do more than sit on your shoulder. LOL Well done |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah Sir Sy they will indeed leave a small deposit laughing... thank you |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes your poetry is incredible!!!!!!!!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much WindWalker! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
indeed, I echo, incredible! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, I look forward to reading you your world tours are a worthy pleasure |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Delightful Kate. I so enjoy reading you, and often peek in just to check on my favorite poets. You are indeed one of those poets.  Good morning, Lady. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very nice. You always seem to capture a lot of feeling in your writes. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much LeeJ… thanks for going ‘round the world with me Stranger thank you for your kind reply Gentle Spirit… good morning to you thank you Steve |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Maybe next time you can go...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"you sent a picture pigeon on your shoulder both of you looking into the camera I don’t recognize the bird and did you have to smile so damn wide?" Wonderful Kate! IWIHWT! Hugs~Nancy |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Just perfect! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James next time anyone goes I’m going… thank you Nancy hugs to you... thank you Sandra…  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa...loved the punch at the end there |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad this floated back to the top... you've a good eye, m'friend.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a little envy you think passing shadows? thank you thank you Karilea always |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
This was tooo good, he..he..he To thy own self be true |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
oh yes. those piegeons. myself and a friend had a bright idea of feeding one of them in san marco's square. it was quite traumatising really. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much twinkyfl1 sure scared me the first time playing |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I was in Venice in September!! I love San Marco Plaza! Loved your words here... beautiful Lady! RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece did you feed the pigeons? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh nooo, I was a little scared of the pigeons!! LOL RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
they are daunting aren't they? so many, all flying at once |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Fantastic write!! Lovely setup and ending brought a smily good feeling. Thank you for sharing the moment. MoonShadow . |
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