Open Poetry #39 |
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ozlem Junior Member
since 2006-10-06
Posts 16 |
I don't want to be loved anymore Such a pain, makes it worse, nothing more I don't want to be the one you adore Hope time will restore [This message has been edited by ozlem (10-08-2006 07:06 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Each time you write, another vision. Sometimes the pain is so great, that subconsciously we push away the very comfort we have sought all along. Or, taken another way... Wait for the healing. Lots of room for interpretations in your works. Well done. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I agree with TD give it time nice job... |
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