Open Poetry #39 |
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One night.. |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Well..i'm a bit sleepy.. Thanks to all those who read my poems and for their advices. Here we go. whenever i take a walk i start reciting to the silence and poems start appearing i recite them into the emptiness until i arrive home to write it but one night i was walking and i was reciting such a nice poem and when i arrived home i just could not write it the silence had stolen it i walked those streets many times already trying to hear the melody trying to hear the lyric but i couldn't recover it you stranger if you ever meet the silence if you ever meet the emptiness tell them to give me my poem back tell them to send me at least the melody or some proof that i have at least finished it cause i no longer remember tell them that i need to recite it cause i think it's about the love i lost |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denis~ 'the silence had stolen it' Ah, you have set loose a poem thought to waft its way into someone else's ink~ Happens to all of us ... and sometimes it circles and returns home to us ... sometimes not~ A lovely and thoughtful penning~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
i agree with your words, and i thank you for reading. i'm glad you liked it, after all i'm just beginning. Denis. |
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