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Open Poetry #39

To my Friends

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-06 05:38 PM

As I Always do, i thank all those who have been reading my poems, in a very short time, i have been welcomed warmly and i enjoy the time i spend here.
Now, this poem goes for my frieds, and the adventures we have been living..

Toghether (Let's Go!)

We were all toghether
and looking to the sky
we wanted an adventure
isn't it all we want?

let's go to that far away place
let's go and get the adventure we want
let's go to the darkest of places
if we have to
but it's alright if we are toghether

we were all toghether
dreaming of paradise
we needed an adventure
isn't it all we like?

let's go to that unreachable place
let's go to that paradise
let's pass those terrible tests
but let's just do it toghether
all of us toghether

who could have ever thought
of us living so many adventures
confronting so many dangers
and being friends

let's go to that far away place
let's go and get the adventure we want
let's go to hell if we have to
but let's just do it toghether

we were all toghether
talking of our pasts
we decided to stay at home
just for once
is it really alright?

we decided to
stay at home a little more
to live outside those dangers
but we knew
that it was just not going to happen

after many days of talking
we took the final decision
we are going to keep dreaming
on reaching that paradise

let's go to that legendary place
let's go to that paradise
let's keep looking
looking for adventure
looking for our dreams
our dreams of paradise

(for all my friends, those incredible persons, and for all the adventures we lived.)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2006-10-09 07:40 PM

What a nice poem.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

2 posted 2006-10-10 10:38 AM

thanks for reading..i'm glad you liked it.
Denis.

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