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Haiku (Rothko Chapel)
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Haiku (Rothko Chapel) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Placid pool like glass reflecting birds’ migration. Autumn sky at dusk. [This message has been edited by iliana (10-07-2006 05:05 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beautiful scene! |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Very lovely! Such wonderful heartfelt work! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My favorite....I've been trying to position myself to take a photograph similar to this, but no luck on the shot I want . . . yet (but now this I carry in my mind for clarification.) J. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jo....I love this form when it is done right...like this.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I can picture this now. Excellent, iliana! misC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds a little like the crystal cathedrial in Garden Grove, California...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks all. http://www.rothkochapel.org/aboutthechapel.htm for a look at the reflection pool at Rothko Chapel. ....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
exquisite haiku jo and thanks for the link peaceful there... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Houston is filled with treasures... and one of them is you. I have reasons to visit there someday... this will be on my list of "to do's". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lily jo, a little piece of 'haikuic' perfection!!! Exquisite!!!  Warm, autumnal hug of love, Linda |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Now that's a Haiku Thank you... INclan |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you all...this place is very special to me. PS to SIL - we'll have to see that place together. ....jo |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When a haiku is done according to form there is not a painting that can compare. Nicely done. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mysteria, that was one very sweet thing to say and gives me much encouragement to keep writing. My poor muse has been gone for quite some time, and I find haiku is about all I can write for now. ...jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What timing. *S* I've been thinking a lot about a friend whose birthday comes next week... her memorial was at that chapel. And your words paint such a picture I don't need to see the photo to see the pool. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I can envision this most picturesque reflection on the serenity of the waters surface as a little fish suddenly comes kissing the suns rays, yay! (angel friendship hugs) Yay, I love this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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