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Haiku (War Memorial)
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Haiku (War Memorial) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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granite panels' enshrining. Firm impressions made. [This message has been edited by iliana (10-07-2006 05:08 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed thanks for this |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
More lovely work! |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
I enjoyed all three of your haiku. I would comment on all but this one struck me the most. I can't do haiku in opposition of you the proof is shown Enjoyed "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun." One God by The Beautiful South |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Close my eyes and see the wall and the feelings my friend j. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
you brought me there |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Mourning glory" it's all been said jo... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, I see them...I feel them...thank you for this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Mourning' glory, indeed. Very well done, lily jo! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Too many memorials too many walls Thank you for remembering INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana All three a delight. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you all for your kind and thoughtful commments.  ...jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I've been to the wall Jo...it leaves one with such an engraved image...Your words do justice to such a special and revered place. HUGS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Probably one of my favorites... but I never seem to have the right corner for them... perhaps I will try again, next year. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Almost missed this one, and what a play on words to make a point. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A beautiful reminder of so many lost loved ones. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (angel friendship hugs) Oh Jo, this poem made me tear up because it had me envision ever so vividly imagining a little flower budding beside my cousin Jeremy's grave and caressing it gently in loving memory! (wipes tear) God Bless You, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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