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Open Poetry #39

she bites the wind

Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-10-05 03:06 PM

She bites the chilling November wind,
Lunges at the opportune moment,in stark solitude.
Freedom! But for what?
To roam endlessly alone, without a companion?
Without one to share days and nights
could be worse than being corralled
alongside those who may not whinny the same tune.
She bites the wind, turns tail into it,
returns to the safety of the enclosed pasture.
Perhaps tomorrow, a different outcome,
though an unlikely scenario for a social creature.

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

1 posted 2006-10-05 03:11 PM

Ah, to test the boundries....

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2006-10-05 11:02 PM

thanks for the visit!
yes, always testing....

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2006-10-06 07:44 AM

I knew I'd love this just by the title!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-10-06 09:04 AM

Many a woman has been like that mare at one time or another!

Well done, Kacy!

Linda

WindWalker
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5 posted 2006-10-31 10:31 AM

This was very good; and I love the imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

writergrl
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since 2006-10-30

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Las Vegas, Nevada

6 posted 2006-10-31 11:42 AM

love this sad lament, short and concise.

writergrl

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Interloper

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Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-10-31 11:58 AM

Well written piece, Kacy.
Sad and melancholy and engrossing.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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