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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I started to do this Labor Day but ran into som difficulty. Soooo, let's try again. I love to write American Senry with as few words as possible. As a result SEA often scolds me for her having to run to the dictionary to decipher meaning. Following is a three word Senryu that I will let you all chew on over the evening and, if you do not find the meaning (with the internet that should not be too difficult a task  ), I will decipher this for you.In the mean time, write your thoughts below and let's have some fun ===== esquivalience unceremoniousness tergiversation Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (10-30-2006 05:48 PM).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I believe I know someone who matched you on five-seven-five syllabled words a few years ago...let's see if I can dig her up...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I DO hope she is not decayed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Hard to tell, y'know... given the season and all... I'll spirit her in here sooner or later...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
avoiding unrestrained ambiguities LOL...I have no idea what I'm doing...but, it's fun!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ If you have to remove a stake from her heart, well, I dunno .... Nancy ~ I love it But what does the original mean, kiddo? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
 No stake, but other chains, I'm sure. As to what your senryu might mean? You've too much time on your hands, Texan! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Jest take the bull by the horns and let 'er flicker li'l lady americanized institutionalizing maternalism whaddayaknow ... a three word senryu acrostic that may not be politcally correct in more than one way  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
avoidance of one’s official responsibilities to become free to change one's position in life... it's election time...could mean anything *thanks for the bump up... M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your Heart Beats Wildly At every sudden swept chill Abrupt, the gasp I'm going to guess the challenge senryu has to do with the shy and hidden heart, abrupt in it's withdrawl. Admit having a hard time pegging esquivalience...so I read between the lines! Great idea for the challenge. Enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Maureen ~ You are the ONE You deserved it. TD ~ How could my heart beat any other way Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 got me |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
To paraphrase its meaning in senyru form, I'd say: Neglecting duties As if they did not matter And walking away! Is that anywhere close to the gist? David Every Day's a Blessing And Gift-Wrapped from Above, Share it with another And Spread the Father's Love!!! May You come to Know His Best Blessing |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
passing shadows ~ Now that I gotcha what do I do with ya David ~ Yore mightly close, pardner Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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