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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-10-16 06:57 PM

Themed

I find myself speaking my heart to the sky these days
And nights…
It doesn’t matter where we go, or end by rights
Just the journey that we spent to get there
Seeing forward, into possibility spread out before me
I find red eyes that tempest far into a fiery sea
An age of advanced thinking maybe, copper clad ordeal
When did we cease to feel?

Phone lines quiver in extremity
Taking my first step into the realm of lost amenably or hope
E-living for the moment, on someone else’s rope, the terms
That I cannot warm into, for comfort or thrill
For I love you still
When founded on the strength of friendship
Does that boat ever sink?
Never in a storm I think, for it is you so softly by me

I have come into my own, by voice and will
Giving everything, and every part of me until
The one that lights my sky is safely home, tenderly to roam
The wild footsteps all along my water’s edge
Looking in your eyes my heart won’t hedge
For then on lover’s lips shall I divulge my dreams
Making our reality of everything it seems
Faithfully to ride the waves of days held hand in hand

Copyright Kkh 10/16/06

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

1 posted 2006-10-16 09:03 PM

Great write! I personelly liked this part:

"I have come into my own, by voice and will
Giving everything, and every part of me until
The one that lights my sky is safely home, tenderly to roam
The wild footsteps all along my water’s edge"

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-10-16 11:53 PM

"I find myself speaking my heart to the sky these days
And nights…
It doesn’t matter where we go, or end by rights
Just the journey that we spent to get there"

so well said TD
wonderful work...

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2006-10-31 10:34 AM

This is one of your best!!!!!!!!!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-10-31 12:03 PM

What a wonderful write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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